Mr and Mrs Smith.

That poignant moment when we meet
Like long lost friends
So discreet
You look good together
Why do you need me
Is he blind
Is it me
We play the game
It’s nothing new
Hotels are full of Smiths 
Like me and you
I should move on 
You should too
You look good together
Him and you
We plan the next
Somewhere new
Mr and Mrs rendezvous
She’s sleeping now
I gaze her naked way
Thinking to myself
Someday
Turning to hide his shame
The woman with his brothers name.

Reviews

[Ardra]

Somehow I stumbled upon this one searching for Jack and Jill heheh...
You always have something up your sleeves... :p
The title caught my attention...
The hotel is full of Mr. And Mrs. Smith nicely explained..

[Paul Bell]

I hope this isn't you. Imagine if we were next door to each other. The lecture I would give you. lol

[Ardra]

you planning give lecture heheh..What's with guys and giving me lectures :p
Do I look like I need a lesson or two hahah..

[Paul Bell]

If you're in the hotel with Mr Smith, and I'm in the next room with Mrs Smith. Afraid I'm giving you a lecture.

[Ardra]

Hahaha.. I wouldn't dare do that to you ... am too much in love with my life ;))

[Paul Bell]

And you definitely don't want the firm pillows, which can be delivered like immediately.

[Ardra]

Mmm yes.. I have taken that into consideration n ordered us feather pillows.. :p

[Paul Bell]

Ok Mrs Smith. I'm just in the process of ending my contract with the other Mrs Smith.

[AYVID N]

How do these things happen? I guess we just can't control some things. Sin takes its course sometimes so what if its a different Adam and Eve. Loved this twisted read.

[Paul Bell]

Yeah, it all started with Adam and Eve.

[The Iron Horseman]

Fred? :D
Seriously though, a recipe for disaster if ever there was one!

[Paul Bell]

Some disasters take time to happen.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes passion strikes hardest when it is a taboo situation...we want what we can't have...and then have it anyway...the force much too strong to resist.
j.

[Paul Bell]

Yeah, the walls can only come crumbling down.

[Einstein Noodle]

the stuff of Hollywood and tabloids ...to our shame ...happens all the time ...the clarity of a poor choice for both is what appeals to me the most in your poem ... it is smooth and has easy to see imagery for me ..but it is so very sad when these destructive choices are made :((( i think it adds to war and hate karma. powerful poem for me Paul
E.

[Paul Bell]

So true Einstein. Brothers in arms. Sadly not in lovers.

[Carol Cashes]

Ooohhhh! Last Line Slam! Nicely done.

[Paul Bell]

Did you like that carol. Maybe to much me thinks.

[Gee]

Chubby Chequer would have been chuffed with that twist Paul. Nicely done old bean, spiffing

[Paul Bell]

Thanks Gee. Now i'm saying, Chubby Chequer chuffed in fast motion. lol

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Heavy! Eloquently penned memoir? Fantasy? Fiction? In any case, elegantly presented with a complex and surprising twist at the end...stunning.

[Paul Bell]

Always need a twist.

[BBP]

Clever clever! I really liked the twist you played her.

Well done friend

[Paul Bell]

Thought your dodgy mind would like that. lol

[BBP]

aaaaaaaaaaahahaha my dodgy mind! lol not sure anyones ever summed me up that well before lol