Crimson Blue.

It started on Crimson blue

The ocean touching you

Your body free from soul

Inviting colours no

You see his eyes undress, caress

You shy away, tempted

Casual look

He’s watching, like he knows

Colours no

The waves crash

unselfish

pulses flow

Explosion in colour grows

The woman in you, glances

Free from soul

He’s watching, like he knows

Whispering to you

The secret of Crimson blue.

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

Very visual, intense, a taste, a want ...

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Seduction at its best! I'm thinkin' it's a good thing that I'm a an ole' married woman with brown eyes! I'm thinkin' your the dangerous kind that pushes a woman to the brink...smiles, and she is fallin' over the edge.

[Paul Bell]

Doesn't stop you being seductive. I think you need to be seductive in marriage. I think todays woman does the pushing now. At least in Britain anyway. They tend to get what they want here. Which is not a bad thing.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

I agree, I'm one of those that is kinda old fashion in relationships

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Beautiful description of the sea
She's full of mystery and Adventure.

Beautifully penned

[Paul Bell]

Thanks Benita.

[An owl on the moon]

How the sea comes alive in your letter and lines, and every curve of the sensual secret souls unveiled. Beautiful, powerful flow of thought.

[Paul Bell]

Thanks. Sort of wish for the warm sea just now.

[redzone]

aahhh the sea, pulling you out deeper and pushing you back, rocking you like a sensuous lover... and yes becoming part of the explosion of colors as wave crest and crash on the shore... very sensual write Paul...

redzone

[Paul Bell]

It's a nice feeling.

[Marina]

That poem was smooth it created a whole new level of sensation, Paul. It's pleasantly upsetting, thanks for that Paul.

[Paul Bell]

Just that sort of guy Marina. Plus i need everyone on board for Santa's dilemma. Which we co- wrote. lol

[Marina]

Have we informed Santa though?

[Paul Bell]

We did say some harsh words to him.

[Lorry]

Nicely captured Paul. Has a complete feel of movement, like bobbing up and down in amongst the waves, hinting at the freedom and emotions felt, when completely free of restraint, where we can just be. Love it.

[Paul Bell]

Yeah the sea does it always.

[Lydia Shutter]

Mysteriously sensual seduction throughout this one, Paul. A sort of "pleasure/pain" dichotomy. The words sway. I enjoyed it. Lydi**

[Paul Bell]

Thanks Lydi.

[barleygirl]

Very much enjoyed this sensual provocative haunting journey filled with vivid yet hesitant descriptions.

[Paul Bell]

Glad you liked it Margie.

[Valentine]

I like Jacobs review of this piece. We all seem to get something from watching the waves crest . Valentine

[Paul Bell]

We do Kathie.