Anymore.

Anymore.

A Poem by Pat Lynch
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Just a simple love poem.

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I don’t know

Where I am

Anymore.

I don’t know

Who you are

Anymore.

I don’t know

What this is

Anymore.

 

And it hurts me to say this

 

But I do know

I can not do this

Anymore.

© 2013 Pat Lynch


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Pat Lynch
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This is a beautiful piece right here I had enjoyed reading it, I'm not much of fan of poem that repeat (sorry I forgot what's its called) but this one just had my attention! I give it 100/100

Posted 10 Years Ago


Those are probably the last words any girlfriends want to hear their guys say. This one cut through all the bs and the repetitive "anymore" really punctuated each sentence, like a sharper version of the period. NICELY DONE


Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on February 27, 2013
Last Updated on February 27, 2013
Tags: Love, Romance, Confusion, Relationships, Poetry

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Pat Lynch
Pat Lynch

NY



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