The Man in Charge

The Man in Charge

A Poem by Pat Lynch

The vibrant colors of her shirt burn my eyes

She walks towards me, hands open wide

She asks for my homework, and I give her lies

Her hands crash down on my shoulders, like a tide.

 

I hand her my paper, and we exchange a chuckle

She walks to the front of the room, shaking her head

Out of nervous desperation, I crack my knuckle

shouldn't have come to school, should have stayed in bed.

 

She sits in her chair and reads her book

While I sit in mine and finish my work

I glance up for a second and she gives me a look

I stare right back, and give her a smirk.

 

The clock continues to tick, and she begins to yell,

“Not this time” I say, as I am saved by the bell.

© 2013 Pat Lynch


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Hmmm. Good poem. I liked how your poem was smoothly written. I think that if you have maybe a few rhymes, your poem would be even better. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


do your dang homework.
but this is a super cute super good write
thank you for sharing


Posted 11 Years Ago


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Added on February 14, 2013
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Tags: Class, School, Poetry, High School

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Pat Lynch
Pat Lynch

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I'm a high school student who is looking at pursuing a career invlolving English in the future... just trying to get some practice, criticism is appreciated more..

Writing
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A Poem by Pat Lynch