Sway

shall we dance

Dance with me
please
hold me close
sway with me
bone to bone
arms around
waist
arms around
neck
sway

Let the music take us
to another
realm
just you
me
swaying

Not too close
when we are alone
then
we will fall into
each others skin

For now
just need you
holding me
dance me
and sway
with me

Stay

Author's Note

restoration .. my mind is numb so no poems or stories come .. they are sleeping

Reviews

[Blackbirdsong]

I can almost hear and feel the rhythm of the music in this one. I really love the inner thoughts of the speaker. The flirty way she's like come here, but not too close. Later. That's the way to control a man. Besides they love it when we take command like that. lol

Good read. :)

[Literary Queen Na Tasha..]

With all the popular dancing shows on right now. This is right on time. Good Write.

[Bretteanie~lena]

i absolutly love this poem, it is so sweet and tenderhearted, it just reminds me of pureness and love, idk there is just a fluenity to it...well yeah ttyl
Bretteanie~Lena

[Robert Luna]

Okay I know that i reviewed this piece but it is not here. Hmmm

Oh well

I love the simple pureness of this piece the way you lay your heart out so openly.
Seeing you a seeker of life and understanding of the way you world is developing
into more than what you would normal only show on the surface.

Great Job!!!

[|:x: Butterfly :x:|]

:) i LOVE this poem!!
its like you were with me tonight
when i was with my boifriend.

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Your love o dancing is all to clear here ,sounds o.k when you put it like that .A lovely thought for someone with two left feet ..Someone like me !

[Debra Stevens Edwards (..]

The poem almost moves with the rhythm of the dance as your words make the music and the flow letters are like notes played for the soul. This has a magical quality to it that makes it universally
moving like music and dance. Making each of those who read this long to sway with the dance.
A truly enjoyable piece. Well written.
Debby

[Valentine]

This reminds me of the part of dancing I liked the best, no feet moving just holding on to someone special and swaying to the music. Like it all but the 5th line..it seems to take away the depth of the feeling pictured here..Valentine

[Heart Of A Wolf]

Good poem and a nice read.

[Califia Hurtado]

AWESOME. This reminds me of the song Sway by the Pussycat dolls. It makes me want to grab someone and dance smoothly and effortlessly across the floor, close to that person and happy with that person. Wow. NIcely done. I like how it invokes the emotions and lets the mind travel to that moment where your body was being moved along the dance floor by another sweet soul. :D

[Jessica L Auster]

Gorgeous poem.