Sway

shall we dance

Dance with me
please
hold me close
sway with me
bone to bone
arms around
waist
arms around
neck
sway

Let the music take us
to another
realm
just you
me
swaying

Not too close
when we are alone
then
we will fall into
each others skin

For now
just need you
holding me
dance me
and sway
with me

Stay

Author's Note

restoration .. my mind is numb so no poems or stories come .. they are sleeping

Reviews

[Blackbirdsong]

I can almost hear and feel the rhythm of the music in this one. I really love the inner thoughts of the speaker. The flirty way she's like come here, but not too close. Later. That's the way to control a man. Besides they love it when we take command like that. lol

Good read. :)

[Leigh]

These words have a lovely feel to them and I can feel the movement in them, It feels like a song

[((Teenage_Poet_Loser))]

omw i love this... i had a clear image of the couple dancing with the soft music... very good!

[Cerebriation]

I love poems that leave much to the imagination, and this one fits the bill. I also love the repetition. It gives it a sort of melody.

[Suheil Kapadia]

Beautiful, it read to me like movements on a dance floor. Dancing is like poetry, and here, you've just done the opposite :) Well done!

[Rossen]

I hear sexual healing in the background as the dancers hold each other up,
softly swaying the night away...

[Harley Ann]

I like that song lol. Surely you know which one I'm talking about ;)
This poem is a wonderful compliment to the song, to movement and rhythm. Nice work :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

we will fall into each others skin.........what a wonderful thought, makes all of me smile.

[Jibey]

The words seemed to sway down the page... in a pleasing kind of encounter... close enough for comfort but not too close...

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

what a lovely array of movements both physical and emotional you've created here with the rhythm of words~ beautiful~

[Siddhartha]

Beautiful and sensual piece of work...Also reminded me of the wonderful song, Sway With Me by michael buble...