Ouija Vu

I hit the ground running
Feet flat on the clouds
As fast as Mercury
With broken wings
Light as an elephant
Heavy as a feather
Where's the ouija board
Deja vu
Deja vu
Day- light view
Not needed whispered
Purple dragonfly dressed in rags
Not needed butterfly
Dressed in silk hummed
Cloud-light shining brightly in my eyes
Blinding me
Seeing eye dog ahead
On a one-dollar bill
Follow me he said
A message I have
Ouija board ?
Deja vu
You swallowed the ouija board
Message inside you said
The viole(n)t-eyed cat with two tails
Soft as quills
Mercurious  sent me
Skimming the earth
Message inside
For better
Or worse
First or last
Now or later
Forever
Until the next
Deja vu
Deja vu
Orange light flashes
Shivering neon
Message must wait
Today's not the day

Reviews

[David Scott]

That was a neat play with words! Ver well thought. Not my favorite form, but I liked the concept for sure.
Be well

[Baby Ricochet]

Great imagery. Loved it

[Dr. Wood ?]

make a great song.....imaginative and obscure

[Crimson_Catastrophe]

Mystical, elegant.
The wording and the beat adds to the feeling
Of magic.
I like it.
Keep writing!

[Kennabee]

Your way with words makes the reader immediately fall into the poetry and it doesn't let them go until the poem is over.

[Poetic Beauty]

Deja Vu can be a creepy feeling. I love the mysterious feel of this poem. You have captured the mystery and eeriness of the unknown

[Kenaz]

Your title intrigued me and your similes left me smiling. Fantastic

[Poetic Justice]

clever, snappy and brilliant word play.. I wouldn't expect anything else from you :)

[MOON]

Love the title your play on words and the flow .light as an elephant heavy as a feather, great lines the thinking persons poem.

[Kristallo]

Love the imagery in this one.
You swallowed the ouija board
Message inside you said
The viole(n)t-eyed cat with two tails
Soft as quills
Mercurious sent me
Skimming the earth

You are such a talented writer. The flow and rhyme scheme pours so smoothly from the challis of your imagination, you take the reader on a dreamish trip through mindscapes pregnant with symbolism and brimming with ingenious invention. I like it. =)