Kiss

kisses can change many things...

My heart quickens when your lips touch mine
a feeling so divine
beautiful
wonderous

How does the simple beauty of one kiss
fill me with such bliss?

How can I be in the darkest place of my soul,
and then, with the touch of your lips, be blinded by light?

How?

Because the kiss is from you
my heart"s desire
my other half of me
you

                                

Author's Note

just soul kisses

Reviews

[Blackbirdsong]

Usually repetitions in small poems stick out to me, here it works well. The repeated words and rhymes trickle down throughout the poem in such a wonderful simple way. It's very much like the kiss you describe. You send shivers down the poem as well.

"My heart quickens when your lips
touch mine
a feeling so divine,
so wondrous,
bewitching"

Good job.

[The Random Writings Of ..]

I like this very much.
How can I be in the darkest place of my soul
then with just the touch of your lips
be blinded by light?
This is my favorite line, I can so much relate to your feelings here.

Yes I often wonder how one kiss can feel you with such bliss.
Excellent write.

[Tigerlobo]

Saw a kiss...couldn't resist...and upon reading it: neither could you!! That was just perfect!

[Chalkios]

I like your poem, short, precise and as it may seems short, long seems to be the kiss that holds

Kypros
xxx

[Raymond. T. Gumbley]

I don't know about the poem being called kiss it seems all the words kiss each other and are meant to be.

I enjoy reading poems which a are short concise and don't conform.

I like the way some lines are just one word it brings stength to the words you use.

[Racheal]

This is so beautiful and touching. I can feel the heat and the passion radiating from the piece and it makes me sad to be alone right now. Well done.

[Writer Of Life]

BRAVO ON BEAUTY...and class and beauty and did say, I love this poem...
Nicely done...
Nice kiss....
mmmmuah!
love you
candi

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How does that song go "is it in his kiss" ,well it obviously can be ey...Nice hearted poem with a hint of lust...

[Michael V]

Yumm. I like the fire that burns in this. Theres a aggresive desire that is ready to pounce. I'm smiles.

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

breathtaking, :P ----mishel

[Crazy Cat Man]

:) yeah i feel like a kiss from a love one is the best feeling in the world. :) ive been told my self im a great kisser.....great poem