Kiss

kisses can change many things...

My heart quickens when your lips touch mine
a feeling so divine
beautiful
wonderous

How does the simple beauty of one kiss
fill me with such bliss?

How can I be in the darkest place of my soul,
and then, with the touch of your lips, be blinded by light?

How?

Because the kiss is from you
my heart"s desire
my other half of me
you

                                

Author's Note

just soul kisses

Reviews

[Blackbirdsong]

Usually repetitions in small poems stick out to me, here it works well. The repeated words and rhymes trickle down throughout the poem in such a wonderful simple way. It's very much like the kiss you describe. You send shivers down the poem as well.

"My heart quickens when your lips
touch mine
a feeling so divine,
so wondrous,
bewitching"

Good job.

[Gomer LePoet]

an older poem with relevance that outlast time itself. I can think of nothing better than a kiss that channels energy to the heart and soul. nice piece Chloe.

[Gandré]

the ending was very nice... such a symbiosis... kisses are source of beauty and value in life. I like how innocent you wrote about them..They are revitalizing every love. Shakespeare says in Othello - I kissed thee ere I killed thee, no way but this, / Killing myself to die upon a kiss. I enjoyed this a lot. It's heartfelt and honest.

[Kellius the Genius]

Very well written.The power of a kiss. hmmmmm.
Wonderful,Beautiful wordplay continue the good writing.
Peace & Love.

[Chad Wesley Allbrett]

Yeah, what is it about a kiss, (a great kiss that is?)
Thank you for this.

[The Tao of Bri]

This was ausch a beautiful poem that is a light all in itself so it is!

[Dani California]

My heart quickens when your lips
touch mine
a feeling so divine,
so wondrous,
bewitching"

This piece is breathtaking :) Lovely write! Flows perfectly.

[Gary H]

Seems this is one written some time in the past and resurrected. Thanks for doing that. I missed this before and this enthralls me. You have five kisses here, at different length, coming up for air and affecting in different ways. This makes the poem float in thought that, as you say, 'kisses can change many things.....'

Nicely done.

[bluessadmood]

oh dear yes love make wonders ,i just wish there was enough of it in this stupid world

[Staci Brown]

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My heart quickens when your lips
touch mine
a feeling so divine,
so wondrous,
bewitching

Perfect! :)

Faerie Blessings!
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[B. Lapinski]

sweetness on rhye