Crawl to Me

Come to me baby
down on your knees
oh baby I love it when you crawl

Crawl to me
oh, baby , baby

Watch me as I sway
just for you baby , only you
dripping honey you make me

Wanna go down , oh baby
just can't leave you now

Watch me as I sway
oh baby we got all day
make me wanna stay

Honey , sweet
no way am I walkin' out that door

Crawl to me
oh baby , crawl
you make me wanna stay

Oh baby we can play all day
games no one else would play

Come to me baby
come to me now
oh baby baby you make me

Wanna crawl
I wanna crawl to you, just you

Crawl to me baby
let the honey drip
oh sweet baby taste it on your lips

Crawl oh baby, baby crawl
Scream it, scream it out loud

Baby baby you you you
crawl to me make my honey drip
sway with me baby , stay with me baby

Crawl , crawl, crawl on your
knees to me -to me- to me
oh baby love keeps flowin '

Love you baby baby baby
oh baby, you, you, you
make me wanna

Author's Note

Well now - you may wonder what this is all about and you may say this is one suck ass poem - actually it is lyrics or poem inspired by Led Zepplin's song 'You Make Wanna Crawl"- I think i wrote this wrong for the contest .. said write how it makes you feel .. i don't know about this ... is it an embarrassment? Truthful opinions - i can take it on the chin
If you know it or listen it is so so so sexy - voice and guitar makes you wanna crawl lol
I ain't no song writer .. my shot for the contest -anything with music i'm in ..

Reviews

[Ladysue]

this is highly lyrical and would make an excellent song..wonderfully done...

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

actually the repetitive cadence defines the urge at the core of the poetic quite poignantly~well put together~rhythmic~

[bob, small b. aka invs]

ok. it may not be great poetry, but it could be a kick a*s song.

[SpokenWord]

Yes this is written as a song one that gives the desire between two to make each crawl to each other, equals lost in love instead of one being the Dom and one being the sub in a way. I had never heard this song by Led Zep but I love it :) I have to find it to download it now. :P

[A Risen Heroine.]

Nice written :3
I like it.

keep up the good work.

~A Fallen Heroine~

[Coyote Poetry]

It felt like music to me. Need some loud music and we may have a song. Nothing as good as when someone is willing to make us content. A excellent poem.
Coyote