Chocolate Truffles

Would you dream a dream with me
Close your eyes - and we are
Dancing together beneath silver stars
The music slow , sweet and dreamy
Our bodies fit like black gloves
On a movie starlet
We sing our own song
The music is inside us now
Beautiful , like your eyes
Your lips drip honey
Like a bee I have to taste
Sweeter than chocolate truffles
Lips collide drinking in the flavor
Passion flares
Kiss me soft like black velvet
Kiss me hard , violet violence
Hold me close
Kiss me again and again
Dance me to the cosmic constellations
We will catch a ride on a comet's tail
As we dream this dream together
Would that this dream last forever

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

The imagery of "Kiss me soft like black velvet" is simply divine! I could feel that line! "Our bodies fit like black gloves on a movie starlet" not only is the imagery splendid, but the simile is so appropos. Oh, yes, who would not want to have this romantic fantasy filled with desire and soft sensuality...and even sprinkled with celestial beauty? Chloe, this is fantastic! Bravo! Lydi**

[lily]

gorgeous piece of writing(:

[Chloe..Across the Universe]

Lillie thank you so much

[Pryde Foltz]

Fantastic and musical piece, Chloe. Fine writing.

[Chloe..Across the Universe]

Thank you very much Pryde

[Vanessa Rico]

How beautifully descriptive this is! Would you dream a dream with me?! What a fantastical line! Chloe, this is so sweet and romantic it makes my heart melt in its tenderness! Such a stunning poem!

[Rossen]

Came back to taste, favorite ~

[Desert Dreamer]

Beautiful, I love the way the music "is inside us now", in your words I see a love so great it becomes part of the cosmic dance, part of nature itself.

[TamiViolet]

Softly sensual w/ just the right amount of raw passion, heightening our senses... 'Kiss me soft like black velvet/ Kiss me hard, violet violence/ Hold me close/ Kiss me again and again...' Gentle yet Rough...Loving yet passionate... Also great is dancing to the cosmic constellations... Sweet.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

kiss me soft like black velvet.........delicious!

[Ladysue]

I like the last two lines especially and the title too..this was sensual filled with vibrant colors and warmth..beautifully done...