No Master Peace

Much to my chagrin
And I say this with 
A shy grin...
I have not written my master piece 
Yet!
No, the Master peace is not yet attained 

Much to my dismay
Even though I would never
Dis May my writing is 
Stifled (but not stiff)
Smothered (without gravy) 

Sad to say this Monday
Can't trust that day..
My writing is 
Sad (with sniffles)
Bad (not like Michael Jackson bad)
Pathetically unpoetic (un-correct)

Much to my chagrin 
No master peace
For me or you...
Yet

Author's Note

quick quack play on words.. much to my dismay unpoetically incorrect
just popped into my head here at manage / add writing .. does it show? LoL!
Seriously, no my name isn't Shirley please don't call me that!- but in all honesty- this sucks!

Reviews

[Celeste21]

Written like old rhyme stories for kids. It had a cat in the hat/ shel silverstein feel. It made me smile :))

[Joshua J. Certain]

You are very creative with your words

[Desert Dreamer]

Your playful words have made me smile, your words make me feel like a kid again and I want to go outside and play.
A great title!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Excellent Chloe. I think when we do finally write it.........we will stop writing because we will no longer be here to write.

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LOL..seriously clever!

[An owl on the moon]

This was truly a dancing play on words. I read and wove through your thoughts, smiling and looking forward to more!

[Jūdan FyreHeart]

I nice play around with words, it's fun and brings a smile. Well done =D

[The Analog Kid]

Funny and cute write Chloe. I understand this...

[Tate Morgan]

LOL we all want to write the divinely inspired piece the work that says we have arrived I too am that way I want to look and say this is the best