If

Should  I kiss your lips
Just the corner of your mouth
Where the honey drips - 
I wonder if  
I would speak your language

Your eyes soft and warm 
Just a tiny glint of devilishness
If I could kiss your eyelids
Softly so softly 
Could I see what you see 

Should I be able to nibble
Your earlobes partially covered
By your beautiful hair
Would I hear what you hear
With heartbeats

I wonder if I could
Kiss you, taste your soul
See myself through your eyes
Hear my heartbeats with yours
If I could would I like the me you see

Author's Note

Quick quack of a write -

Reviews

[.]

love the idea of this..exquisite in composition..and the ending was ingenius!

[Arabdha]

"If I could would I like the me you see'..just one line..but wonder how many can answer in the affirmative ! one of the best pieces on the site..

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

I do love the final line " I like the me you see".
This is what we should feel.

[OT]

ah a very nice write - the musings so well posed - the should I and I wonders - a great poem!!

[Linear]

A quick quack!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It matters little the time you took, for it is a beautiful poem of a perfect love, I felt the words being driven into my pulsing veins, to reach this now glowing heart.........Do not I pray disrespect this poetry/artistry of yours.

[Georgia Gypsy]

It is a lovely write, and nothing quack about it! Full of beautiful sentiment.
It speaks to all of us, who wonder why we are loved...when its so hard to love ourselves.
(I for one struggle with that all the time!!)
-Kelli

[An Ordinary Woman]

*Could I see what you see *

you can indeed, you prove it here with your words.
A beautiful write dear friend. :)

[The Analog Kid]

It's like a mirror's reflection of yourself in the other person when you can't see clearly. He/she makes you whole and able to love yourself by the love for you. This one is a bit tighter form from your usual style. Nice.

[Ladysue]

this is beautiful and passionate. that last line is impacts greatly. This speaks volumes and it very poignant as well as thought provoking. This was well executed and speaks softly and beautifully...