Voodoo Chile

Voodoo Chile

A Poem by Chloe..Across the Universe

Mumbo - Jumbo voodoo chile
Born on  the bayou in the month of June
'Neath a blood-red moon
Mama didn't make it- midwife say,
She couldn't believe you didn't follow too

The Village took you in tho they were not
Very kind you were used and abused by the 
Age of nine you took in grace you took it
In stride Voodoo chiles  got a 
Very strong mind 

As your body blossomed so did your mind
You knew all the herbs knew what vines
So you brewed your tea brewed it fine
Deftly with sparks - voodoo chile
Sure learned how to shine

Turnin' on your charm with a blink of an eye
Said, let's all have a drink reminise  old times
Men so gullible so easy to persuade
Wouldn't be long now
You bout got it made

Bout an hour or so later they begin to gag
Skin turned green eyes bulged blue
Moanin' and groanin' they began to squirm
Lookin' at you they fell to the ground
Last one to fall - bout a quarter-past dead

You jumped to your feet began to chant-
Used me abused me for the very last time
On this day the victory be mine
I spit on you all you ain't nothin' to me
Jus' dirt and grime sickenin' swine

Dancin' round the fire in glitter and glee
Singin' your song of sweet victory-
I tole you once I tole you twice
Not one of you heeded took my advice
Lookin' at you now sure makes me smile

'Cause all along I done tole you once  
Tole you twice ya'll know better than 
Than messin with a voodoo chile like me -
Ya'll shoulda known better 
Messin' round a voodoo chile like me

© 2011 Chloe..Across the Universe


Author's Note

Chloe..Across the Universe
Sorry for using your song title, Jimi -

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brilliant title..first..secondly I read this in a silly foreign voice!! But besides my foolishness, this is fantastic..I was totally immersed in the story of Voodoo Chile..just a brilliant tongue in cheek poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


It has that great beat running through it, you can really feel her singing it. The way it carried on down through the poem with her quiet determination was very nicely done =D

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Chloe..Across the Universe
Chloe..Across the Universe

Smalltown, USA, AR



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