Life Sucker

how many hours spent online verses how many hours spent as quality time with loved ones nature

Get off this life sucker
Take a walk
Look around
Feed a duck
Give someone a smile
Talk to your friends
Kiss your babies
Love your man
Love your woman
Get off this life sucker
Before it is too late
And they are gone

Author's Note

All our friend are important to us online too so don't neglect either , right?
love you all !
Really, i do..

Reviews

[Iota]

You know in a relationship I always make a rule to have quality time when the PC and TV are off and we are alone as one. even if we stare at each other it is something I always desire to have with my love one. However, I have to say that people think men are bad with our video games, sports, TV and hobbies but it has been IMPOSSIBLE to get her to cut off the pc and spend time with me. I always cut off my laptop when she comes over and try to have a talk with her but she is addicted to this on line game called Evony and it is the Antichrist of relationships. I guess your poem has hit a coord in me. It doesn't work if both parties can't get up away from the screen and live life.

[Tina Kline]

Good advice. Give time to all your friends, quality time. I like this.

[Wolfwind Words]

I keep lookin at the clock and I swear it still says the same minute every time I chance a glance! Oh wait...Maybe I should be makin sure the day hasn't gone into the next! lol

So very true Chloe! Bonding time with those we care for is important! I guess sometimes we get so zoned into the world of pixels and pc's that we often fail to take that moment and rejoin the world of the living.

Great Ink!
Wolfie

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

We never know what we got till it's gone... to often we become complacent with those we love and all the wonderful things around us cause we see them everyday... yes I think we all need to be reminded everyday cause we are human and by nature we go back to our confined thinking.

[Sam Severn]

Short n' punchy n' powerful as a Mike Tyson right hook to the jaw! N' "Feed a duck" has got to be one of the greatest lines of poetry, EVER! ㋡

[Elizabeth]

Can you put this on my page once a day? I need this reminder. How does it happen so completely? Hours go by, and it was supposed to be "just one more minute..."