Life Sucker

how many hours spent online verses how many hours spent as quality time with loved ones nature

Get off this life sucker
Take a walk
Look around
Feed a duck
Give someone a smile
Talk to your friends
Kiss your babies
Love your man
Love your woman
Get off this life sucker
Before it is too late
And they are gone

Author's Note

All our friend are important to us online too so don't neglect either , right?
love you all !
Really, i do..

Reviews

[Iota]

You know in a relationship I always make a rule to have quality time when the PC and TV are off and we are alone as one. even if we stare at each other it is something I always desire to have with my love one. However, I have to say that people think men are bad with our video games, sports, TV and hobbies but it has been IMPOSSIBLE to get her to cut off the pc and spend time with me. I always cut off my laptop when she comes over and try to have a talk with her but she is addicted to this on line game called Evony and it is the Antichrist of relationships. I guess your poem has hit a coord in me. It doesn't work if both parties can't get up away from the screen and live life.

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"Look around
Feed a duck
Give someone a smile"
{pissed off and sarcastic--I Love It!}

Great Poem!!!:-)

james:-)

[Wicahpi]

Imagine life before computers.
Seems like centuries ago!!

[kissme]

I agree with you all the way

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

so profound, in so few words, you say so much.....

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

a hip hop beat pop rock with an awsome message thrust about making time for all facets of life~ =)~

[Alicante lullaby]

beautiful...you are telling here to cash off every instance of life before its too late to relish those little pleasures of life...

[mae-mae<3]

haha i like this

[Poeticpiers]

do it now tommorrow may be too late

[kishie]

nice.

[Zeinab]

Very true.
Nice job.