When?

When do I think of you?
When the warm summer rain gently falls
Upon  my upturned face
I think of you tracing butterfly kisses
Indelible across my face
When the sun shines down upon my body
I think of your hands so warm against my bare skin
When night falls and envelopes me in its rich  velvet cloak
I think of your strong arms
Holding me tight against you
Never letting go
When do I think of you 
All the day ,all the night
Never ending

Author's Note

OLD poem when i loved someone with all my heart

Reviews

[Iota]

I can so relate to this poem right now you have no idea! I love when a woman has me thinking of her like this, where my every thought is focused on only her. I even like the sleepless nights and the butterfly in my stomach. My favorite part of this is when the gentle rain falls on your upturned face, that image is an image of joy. When someone has you feeling like this the world becomes more beautiful just like this poem.....

[J. Randall Dodd]

chloe,

i know this is an old poem for you, but this is what i like! this is real...no forced rhymes or half-hearted thoughts, overly melodramatic moaning, just real. it's relate-able and broadly appealing because of its truthfulness. in my opinion rhyming poems are more often bad than good, due to their being seemingly easy. however, the rhyme poems everyone tries to mimic are very difficult to replicate well (that's why they're the masters)...sorry for my slight tangent, now back to your poem...

love it, love it, love it. i don't give gushy reviews very often. that being said, i do have a slight suggestion for making it even better:

i recommend trashing the last two lines
"Forever more - no Raven quote -
Heart Quote"

these lines do nothing for your poem in my opinion, and the previous line makes a great ending. just wish you would end it at "All the day and all the night".

once again, a great poem...the best i've read of yours so far. no bullshit or fluff, really good :)

later.

sincerely,
jr