When?

When do I think of you?
When the warm summer rain gently falls
Upon  my upturned face
I think of you tracing butterfly kisses
Indelible across my face
When the sun shines down upon my body
I think of your hands so warm against my bare skin
When night falls and envelopes me in its rich  velvet cloak
I think of your strong arms
Holding me tight against you
Never letting go
When do I think of you 
All the day ,all the night
Never ending

Author's Note

OLD poem when i loved someone with all my heart

Reviews

[Iota]

I can so relate to this poem right now you have no idea! I love when a woman has me thinking of her like this, where my every thought is focused on only her. I even like the sleepless nights and the butterfly in my stomach. My favorite part of this is when the gentle rain falls on your upturned face, that image is an image of joy. When someone has you feeling like this the world becomes more beautiful just like this poem.....

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I am sorry to those of you who have read these before at this time I can't add any
Besides it would probably well I will just say the mood I have been and it would probably be too IMO as they say
So I am sending one up from the ball of yesteryear long ago I wrote this before I ever joined this café I
IMO now I meant Emo lol and this is not from the ball of yesteryear The vault
Why are these calls smart phones they don't even understand English?!!

[Samuel Dickens]

Such strong passion and emotion expressed here. To have loved is to have lived.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Never ending......oh I know this feeling well....beautiful Chloe!

[Rossen]

The thing I love about people is there need to be cherished
The thing about the way you write is I love that you
show this big as the sky heart in your writing and reviews,
Fancy words are good at sending me to a dictionary, you
take me to heart, all the thanks in the world,
your friend,
Rossen

[The Analog Kid]

Very sweet, tender and honest write. Very poetic!

[emmajoy]

'I think of you tracing butterfly kisses ~ Indelible across my face' - that made me shiver a second's pleasure! What smooth, gentle, beautiful words - seems you remember only too well and - it strikes me, without a moment's bitterness but a lifetime's golden memory.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I often wonder when i see writing with quite a few views and a hand full of reviews, was it that bad- or did it render people speechless because it was so overwhelming?
haha ... I do wonder though ... guess there was nothing they wanted to say.

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Those thoughts of when, we believe they will be forever. Beautiful poem my friend.

[Timtim]

I love this poem, maybe i should start dating girls that write!
I like the expression and the honesty, nothing too complicated nothing to fancy, just simple poetry.

[Ladysue]

This is so heartfelt and real. Just beautiful and no better feeling. Just lovely...I loved this...