Beatles Wisdom

Beatles Wisdom

A Poem by Chloe..Across the Universe
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Some thoughts inspired by the music of The Beatles

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Does anyone here me
Does anyone care
My screams go unnoticed
Like echos from a well

I call out to mankind
Womankind too
But nobody's listening
No not even you

Have you all been so  blinded
Have you lost your sense to see
That love is the answer
So just let it be

The Earth needs our kindness
The people need food
Sick- starved and blinded by too many yous

I call out to mankind
Womankind too
But nobody hears me
Not even a few

Corrupted and filthy
And so out of tune
Our leaders are singing
The same ole sad tune

Does anyone notice
Does anyone care
Take over this nation
Let's fill it with love

Let's sing out in voices
As loud as their bombs
Let's call on our spirit
So we overcome

Have we all been so blinded
Have we lost our sense to see
That love is the answer
So just let it be

© 2010 Chloe..Across the Universe


Author's Note

Chloe..Across the Universe
Simple words and poem written from the heart...
Someday I'm going to write a Master Piece.. it will be
glorious and shine! Someday.....

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Chloe you have written many masterpieces... now I admit i am not the biggest Beatles fan but they are okay... I do however love this... taking inspiration from the band and creating your own piece of artwork... yes your message is loud and strong... we are all just numbers to the Government instead of faces.

Posted 14 Years Ago


oh, i love this. It flowed beautiful and said so much. An awesome song...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It certainly had a Beatles-like feel to it... certainly a cry from the heart... I felt the lines:
'Have we all been so blinded
Have we lost our sense to see'
lose the rhythm.. Maybe 'Our senses don't see' would flow better.

Just let it be... :-)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah yes Let it Be. you know I've been hearing the same crap come out of these politicians mouths for years but nothing ever changes it seems. the rich continue to take care of each other making sure they stay rich and in control.
nice write kido.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Chloe..Across the Universe
Chloe..Across the Universe

Smalltown, USA, AR



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