Spring Cleaning

Spring Cleaning

A Poem by Chloe..Across the Universe
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Wrote this long ago for my mama the first Mothers Day she was DEAD

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My mother loved this time of the year
time for Spring cleaning she'd sing in our ears
so up we would jump from bed when we had
rather pulled the covers up over our heads

Once we were up she would hand us a list
mine was always filled with the best  of the
worse that is

Like clean the toilet and under the beds
When you are done with that, don't forget the shed

My mamas been gone for over a year
some days more than others I shed many tears

Now I know that Heaven is immaculately clean
but being that it is Spring
I know she is cleaning with the Angels
God's Heavenly pews


© 2010 Chloe..Across the Universe


Author's Note

Chloe..Across the Universe
This is an old poem I wrote after my mama died on the first mothers day
my sister has it framed ..lol well i am glad she likes it and hope my mama does too

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The word play and poem described above could be seen to use the same symbolism for cleaning ourselves - for instance, we practice fasting, we clean our bodies and mind and so this is to represent a central procedure in human spirituality in spring, I really liked this sweet dedication to your mama.


Posted 14 Years Ago


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Oh how I can relate to this... lost my mom four years ago... she too was big on cleaning... between yours and mine it must be white glove ready up there... a very sweet dedication indeed.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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This is very sweet. Kind of made my eyes water up! Very good poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Chloe..Across the Universe
Chloe..Across the Universe

Smalltown, USA, AR



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