No Chains
A Poem by
Chloe..Across the Universe
love comes and goes ... it can't be bound or chained
Oh to be loved with such fervor that turns fever-pitched when fingers entwine Oh to be loved with such strength as mighty as Hercules without the weight of the world Oh to be loved-like a ship anchored secure at harbor safe and steadfast For as such love is fevered, strong yet light and like a ship A ship anchored and harbored at dock - yet at anytime without notice the anchor may be hoisted Allowing the ship to sail away such is love
© 2010 Chloe..Across the Universe
Author's Note
just some thoughts on how love is not a promise of forever for lovers-
sad but true as Metallica sings..
Featured Review
I liked this! Love may be a stable/shaky thing. But the true adventure starts when you're both on the ship when the anchor gets yanked and ya gotta ride those storms out together.
And even if one ship floats away and you're not on it, there's always one with a bigger anchor to go exploring! :)
Great Ink chloe!
Posted 14 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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Sometimes love only ends for one, and the other one hangs in the winds of lost love...
Posted 13 Years Ago
Sometimes love only ends for one, and the other one hangs in the winds of lost love...
sad but true. not all loves last a lifetime. some come and brush us by but define us for the erst of our lives. such indeed is love!
Posted 13 Years Ago
sad but true. not all loves last a lifetime. some come and brush us by but define us for the erst of our lives. such indeed is love!
Sad but true. Beautifully stated. Wonderful imagery.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Sad but true. Beautifully stated. Wonderful imagery.
This is the ind of love that would hold out through thick and thin. I think we all want to find a beautiful love like this one.
Posted 13 Years Ago
This is the ind of love that would hold out through thick and thin. I think we all want to find a beautiful love like this one.
such is love, sometimes the wind and the waves are rough
Posted 13 Years Ago
such is love, sometimes the wind and the waves are rough
I love the poem
Posted 13 Years Ago
I love the poem
love is not a promise at all..it's a feeling..well said
Posted 13 Years Ago
love is not a promise at all..it's a feeling..well said
I believe in a forever kind of love that neither time nor distance nor even the grave can sever. I have never loved any other way. It's all I know.
Posted 13 Years Ago
I believe in a forever kind of love that neither time nor distance nor even the grave can sever. I have never loved any other way. It's all I know.
love is such a tidal thing~ isn't it?
beautiful verse undulating~
Posted 13 Years Ago
love is such a tidal thing~ isn't it?
beautiful verse undulating~
Every line rings with truth.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Every line rings with truth.
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Chloe..Across the Universe Smalltown, USA, AR
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