I Wrote a Poem For You

I Wrote a Poem For You

A Poem by Chloe..Across the Universe
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My lack of writing has forced me to write this - have a barf -- bag on hand!

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I wrote a poem for you
really I did but the dog
ate it
every last word
and said, ' Yum, yum'

I wrote a poem for you
honestly I did but I spilled
my drink on it, it soaked it up
every last word -blurred vision

I wrote a poem for you
this is the truth
but the wind blew it away
the tattered page tumbling through the air

I wrote a poem for you
of this I tell no lie
but I dropped my f*g on it
burned to ashes - garish- gray

I wrote no poem for you
I told a little tale
I hope this doesn't send me to hell

Oh well

Does anyone hear bells?



© 2010 Chloe..Across the Universe


Author's Note

Chloe..Across the Universe
I am sorry about this lol
I love you all tho so please - forgive me?
Just too harried and hurried to write what's in my heart, on my mind
so I wrote this drivel
Oooops i didn't mean for this to be rated lol but thanks

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I think this came out better than you expected it to. It held me in and I wondered throughout the entire poem if I should believe weather you did or didn't write the poem for whoever? It also brought about a smile from me. I enjoyed it as well.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I actually really enjoyed this. Its rough, silly almost, but still has a clear voice.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love this one -- i love how it speaks on what you could have had -- and this won't send you to hell

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is top notch poetry. Why haven't I read you before?

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i thought i was.... special. then at the end i find out it's all untrue. i'm heartbroken. now and forever. nah just kidding i like it though. sometimes when you can't write the best thing to do is write and see what comes out.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it and I can relate. I haven't written in months. This was great!! At least you were able to get this out and it gave me a chuckle. Nicely done...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved it... a great saterical look at writers block... I thought it was quite funny and whimsical.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

After some of the drivel I have written what place would I have to say anything. At least you are writing. It took me awhile to try it again. But as long you are writing, you doing something, you are moving forward.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 26, 2010
Last Updated on April 26, 2010
Tags: no muse, nonsense, writer's block

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Chloe..Across the Universe
Chloe..Across the Universe

Smalltown, USA, AR



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Sometimes i feel like an alien in a strange land..can you relate? I love people and friends are just that to me , friends-if you request me as a friend it would be nice if you read something I have .. more..

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