people i could never write so grand .. now for a year no words in my head only an infinte sadness that won't go away this is nothing but it helped a bit of the sadness to go away..for now
peace and love
My Review
Would you like to review this Poem? Login | Register
This was such a heartbreaking yet truthful piece. You conveyed the desperation and loneliness really well, in particular through the way in which your character reacted to the sadness. The second stanza was my favourite in the whole poem! I don't know what it is that I liked about it, but I guess in a way it highlighted the fact that this person was so familiar with sadness, as if it was nothing new, and was to be expected.
Very nicely written. Well done,
~PaperHearts
I dig! I like your portrayal of loneliness and depression through the characters, top notch! I know how it is too, I beat depression without any help, and it's one hell of a struggle, so I can definitely relate to your poem. Overall, killer work, and please, keep it up! I'd love to read more whenever it is you post them!
I love your conversation with Sadness, so easily read and full of emotion. Wonderful rhythm for reading out loud. I find myself hoping Sadness heard your voice and is ready to leave.
Thank you for sharing
This was such a heartbreaking yet truthful piece. You conveyed the desperation and loneliness really well, in particular through the way in which your character reacted to the sadness. The second stanza was my favourite in the whole poem! I don't know what it is that I liked about it, but I guess in a way it highlighted the fact that this person was so familiar with sadness, as if it was nothing new, and was to be expected.
Very nicely written. Well done,
~PaperHearts
Awe Chloe this is so heartbreaking... they say misery loves company and sometimes all we have is our feelings to keep us company.... a lot of emotion went into this piece that I know many can relate to including me.
Such a brilliant, sadly moving conversation... Your elloquence and profound depth made this an amazing read. I'm glad the writing helped the sadness go away... even for a time.
Sometimes i feel like an alien in a strange land..can you relate?
I love people and friends are just that to me , friends-if you request me as a friend it would be nice if you read something I have .. more..