The Lovers

short-short story .. somewhat of a fairytale to many ..most?

The lovers walked along the seascape their hands entwined . The night sky was bright with twinkling stars. A full moon shone down upon the ocean. The silence was filled with tranquility save for the cries of the sea birds. Their nostrils were filled with the frangrance of the smell of salt and sea.

 Walking along the jagged shore  no words were spoken . They had no need  of words  for their's was a love of unity as if they were one .

As they walked farther the terrain became smoother, less rocky. They could feel the sand beneath their feet as they walked to the ocean's edge and let the waves gently kiss their feet.

How humble they felt.  This vast  seemingly endless  sea as old as time  kissing their feet . They stood in silence and awe of the beauty of this moment  and the feelings they felt for each other . Without speaking  they turned facing each other and embraced . Their bodies seeming to melt into each other's as their lips met in a kiss that tasted of sea and salt, beauty and neverending love.

Author's Note

just imagination .. a bit of a 'fairytale'.. unless you know some couple like this ..

Reviews

[Merrick Waters]

It's a nice scene who doesn't want that kind of connection with another human being. I like it!

[An owl on the moon]

We can all dream of such a love... What a beautiful moment of two become one... and even their silence speaks volumes..

[Ladysue]

this is pure blissfulness...'beauty and neverending love' I could use a dose of that...this was beautifully written Chloe, just lovely...

[Rossen]

this is my kind of read, you softly whisk away my dread,
with your magic wand like pen, the good witch spell...

moved again,

Rossen

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem. If we are lucky. We may reach a few dreams in a life. I like the story in the poem. Nature allow dreams to become better. Need a ocean to allow the freedom of love to run free. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[James Watts]

It's the dream we all, or most of us, have. Of finding that one someone to share eternity with nice write.

[Creepy Swine Guy]

You could almost call this a poem. It's very beautiful in it's descriptions. Now I want to go for a walk on the beach.

[Taylor Jay]

made me smile

[Debra Stevens Edwards (..]

I love the touch of innocence and passion entwined to make this a wonderful expressive write. I have always loved your writing and this is the reason. You inject so much of who you are when you write.
Hugs Debby

[Amandalyn]

I like that you took the picture and used it to help your piece. It's was really a good story.