No One Reads Me Anymore

No One Reads Me Anymore

A Poem by Chloe..Across the Universe
"

been gone awhile and so...

"

no one reads me anymore
i am passe with the apostrophe
above the e

see i became;

apathetic
busy
bewildered
clumsy
donovaned
ejected and defected
futile
green around the gills
hurried and harried
insecure
jilted and tilted
karmatised
lazy
motivated-
non
ovalized
pathetic
quintesent
restless
sad
tormented
uninvolved
vexed and hexed
worried
xanaxed without
yonkered and bonkered
zapped

what goes around comes around
no one reads me anymore
as i reciprocate the same

still, i am ahead in this game
more reviews given than recieved

no one reads me anymore
so i sit collecting dust
better to burn
than rust away


close the door







 

© 2008 Chloe..Across the Universe


Author's Note

Chloe..Across the Universe
this is for fun thought it is mostly true lol .. but as i said i have been absent and
seems hard to find , and i have neglected my thank-yous and you ..
life's been a bit upside down so i will read you soon

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Awe Chloe, I think everyone is just busy. Summertime calls! Family vacations, kids out of school, summer projects...It's definitely not because you are not an A # 1 writer, because you have been and always will be one of the TOP writers. Everyone is behind on read requests...Hang in there lady. XO Carole

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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you know Chloe - had some health issues with my daughter - and have recently returned to discover the same. I think what you say here is true; neglect the thank yous and return reviews and you are soon in a corner by yourself around here. Feel free to drop me a read request hon - always happy to read you!

*hugs*

laura

Posted 16 Years Ago


I came to read you when I saw that you were sad. I know the feeling and position of this post. I too have been distant from the cafe...but I am purposely coming back with the intent of getting more involved. If you ever need a reader - hit me with a request, comment or email. I am happy to come over.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Awesome! I love it. Good work. I plan on reading more...

Posted 16 Years Ago


I hear you, girl. Been through a lot of it myself. Atleast you're finding a way to express your frustrations in a positive creative way. It's original with the alphabetical structure. I like your word choices and combinations as well.
-hurried and harried
-jilted and tilted
-karmatised (Nice one!)
-quintesent
-vexed and hexed
-xanaxed without yonkered and bonkered

Good writing.

Cheers,
Willy Blake

Posted 16 Years Ago


Nice write

=)

Posted 16 Years Ago


hahahaha your full of crap......... you get more reads this me x 500 and i think you were better then any of the headliners on here anyway............. anyway nice write i enjoyed i left you a comment 2

Posted 16 Years Ago


You really tell the truth with this one. I've been feeling like this myself. I barely read, review or even post anything here anymore. I just don't care about this site like I used to. I've made lots of good friends here and I keep in contact with them, but as far as giving as much as I used to this site...not anymore.

Life does have a way of getting in the way of creativity...so it's good to see you posting this my friend. I know you've been busy with this like I have..and look at how many people have reviewed you.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Well, this piece has quite a few reviews for someone no one reads. lol I'm glad to see you up and typing. lots of love to you.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Heres what is hoped to be the first of many you get... love the alfabet started lines...

Posted 16 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chloe, dear.
We haven't neglected you either.
Life's busy and hectic.
Summer most of all.

Give it time. =)
You'll be reviewed so much soon you won't know what to do with yourself!
Patience

~Rd

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Chloe..Across the Universe
Chloe..Across the Universe

Smalltown, USA, AR



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Sometimes i feel like an alien in a strange land..can you relate? I love people and friends are just that to me , friends-if you request me as a friend it would be nice if you read something I have .. more..

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