No One Reads Me Anymore

No One Reads Me Anymore

A Poem by Chloe..Across the Universe
"

been gone awhile and so...

"

no one reads me anymore
i am passe with the apostrophe
above the e

see i became;

apathetic
busy
bewildered
clumsy
donovaned
ejected and defected
futile
green around the gills
hurried and harried
insecure
jilted and tilted
karmatised
lazy
motivated-
non
ovalized
pathetic
quintesent
restless
sad
tormented
uninvolved
vexed and hexed
worried
xanaxed without
yonkered and bonkered
zapped

what goes around comes around
no one reads me anymore
as i reciprocate the same

still, i am ahead in this game
more reviews given than recieved

no one reads me anymore
so i sit collecting dust
better to burn
than rust away


close the door







 

© 2008 Chloe..Across the Universe


Author's Note

Chloe..Across the Universe
this is for fun thought it is mostly true lol .. but as i said i have been absent and
seems hard to find , and i have neglected my thank-yous and you ..
life's been a bit upside down so i will read you soon

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Awe Chloe, I think everyone is just busy. Summertime calls! Family vacations, kids out of school, summer projects...It's definitely not because you are not an A # 1 writer, because you have been and always will be one of the TOP writers. Everyone is behind on read requests...Hang in there lady. XO Carole

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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Cruising through the site, just checking into writers to taste the flavor of their words, I like this, it is raw, honest, displays your vulnerable side, but doesn't shut the door. Come back and write some more!

Posted 15 Years Ago


love this poem...so honest and vulnerable...and girl, you CAN write, who told you that you were not good?
jo

Posted 15 Years Ago


The title grabbed me with this piece. I don't know if it was intended, but this has a Bohemian flavor. I really liked it's honesty, and rhythm. You still have it, and are a much better writer than you think. I am hard to please. This piece pleased me. Love, Rain..

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tell me about upside down lives! ROTFL It seems that the one joy I do find in this crazy life of mine is to find the time to come to the computer and either write or visit. Then this comes up .... That comes up .... and most of all Joseph (My three year old grandson arrives for the day) This reminds me of some things I have written in the past. Wishing for you time and energy to pursue your beautiful muse. Blessings, Lesa

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awww...love this piece! It's not a great feeling, no, but everything comes and goes in waves I think. We'll all be washing up on your shores sooner than you care to have us, not to worry! lol
I absolutlely do love this piece... the fact that I didn't even notice the alphabet till I was at xyz is completely amazing and genius to me. I hope you are feeling better.... and getting more reads!!!
Much love~~

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

welll i guess i'm excused!
i have my reasons i haven't been online in a long LONG TIME!
wish me luck, as so i do for you!
be well

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aw, we all get here some days sweetheart. We come and go. Here more or gone more. You aren't forgotten.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Wow this found me karmically and was the perfect injection of get off my butt. I'm so ART I canna close the door, it would only build pressure and blow wide open. You've chosen all the weak excuses I would use to describe my stubborn angst...alas this poem need not be reworded by me...and having read it and digested it's soft/hard impact, now I'm so much lighter, thanks for the poetry fiber!
I likes your style...did it work for you? Did it resolve or just express?

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Everyone has times where the writing muse becomes a fickle thing. Hard to find and define. But you are still being read. And here is the proof...
Mark

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

although i'm rather new to the cafe i understand your feelings. nothing worse than posting a bit of your soul and nobody even comments. does wonders for one's self esteem. well, i read this one and liked it a lot. i'll come back for more.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Chloe..Across the Universe
Chloe..Across the Universe

Smalltown, USA, AR



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Sometimes i feel like an alien in a strange land..can you relate? I love people and friends are just that to me , friends-if you request me as a friend it would be nice if you read something I have .. more..

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