Sweet Noir

Sometimes darkness finds me....once again

Cover me hold me
wrap me in your soft
cloak of blackest velvet
caress me with your closeness
darkness

It has been sometime
since last we were together
i didn't forget you
i'm ready for you now
my old forever love

You were always there for me
your softness enveloping me like
a lover so close
my  beautiful darkness

How could have i stayed away for so long
i have been so hollow without you
no soul mate
sweet noir
darkness fair
lovely fate

You never forsake me
always you come to cast your spell upon me
to make me realize what tears are for
what hurt is about

Sadness
loneliness
you know the feelings well
beautiful dark

You have shared my nightmares
fears broken spirit
i have seen you cry
cried with you

i know now i cannot live without you
my lover
forever darkness

Please hurry
come
i am waiting impatiently
for your caress

You light up the skies
pull me into you
holding me till dawn's first light
my electric darkness

Like mercury come quickly
together we will light the midnight skies
with our tears and sorrow
till morrow's early light

                                Bewitch me
 

Author's Note

Sunny skies sometimes are overcome by clouds...The picture is called "Fighting Darkness".. I rather like it

Reviews

[Roy]

Distinctly Gothic.

I loved the piece - especially because the two times that I read it - I came out with two very different interpretations and undercurrent of emotions conveyed: the apparent enlightenment, and an undercurrent of silent resignation. Great work!

[Rossen]

You are such a moving writer...

I now know the long warm pause before the storm
I feel it coming

[cfix]

I like it, there is always a light where there is darkness,
I have been trying to teach that to myself for years.
Shadows will only comfort you for a while until they
shake you up and make you look at yourself. Strangely
enough there is a light in the world to see. I guess we
have to stumble along the way before we can walk.
Very well done Chole, I really enjoyed this insight.

[Tate Morgan]

Sometimes it is strange the bedfellows we keep and the soul mates we have very interesting and a depth of thought

[SpokenWord]

People often fear the dark and rarely embrace it as being apart of themselves just like light. It is the combination that makes us human even mortal. Even within our darkest times it is always possible for one person to bring light into our universe and make our perception of this world, of our lives change from darkness to sunny days. We often forget though that even in the darkness that is in our heart there is also light and at any time we can make the choice to chose light over dark. It may be a struggle or even seem impossible but within our bodies that are a temple after all is all we need to handle this life. Great and beautiful write.

[Ruth]

In darkness, there is always light to be found:)
This captures the battle really well hon
A loss of light, always hard to accept, internally or externally!
Awesome!
xx

[Tai Chi Italy]

I kinda love it Miss Chloe! It has a transparency in sensuous acceptance that astounds this reader. Beautifully written.

Smiling at you

Tai

[Ghiasquared]

My soul felt the pang of kindred separation here. Familiar visions well painted across my closed eyes as if the words were slowly spoken in sullen voice.

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[Angelheaded Hipster]

Chloe!! Youre still writing....imagine my happy surprise, and I like this! It sings to me of a comforting sadness...when it gets to where youre waiting for the other shoe to drop or some such.
Very descriptive. I will be back to catch up on the writing...