Ghost Town

Ghost Town

A Story by Chloe..Across the Universe
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not what you expected i betcha

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I feel as if i am in a ghost town and the words and feelings of these ghost haunt me. The people seem to have vanished or maybe fell into an abyss .. some may be swimming to the moon .. I don't know where everyone is and it feels a little frightening when i am here .. it is a lonely feeling ...where'd everybody go? I may be hallucinating , it is possible .. but then again.. Then again... and then ...

Did Blackbird lose her voice? Did Bubo break a nail? Has Rain drown in a deluge? Brighteyes eyes dim? Maybe she went to live with the fairies? Helen and her wisdom gone?  Carole too? Did Tammy tear her dress? Did Valentine take a bus back North? Debbie take a breather? I wonder if the moon melted Jude and T? Seb must be on Sabbatical. Dale rode off into the sunset. Perhaps Gary and Natalie landed on the dark side of the moon.
Petea must have surfed into space. Jo must have lost his place. So many MIA's ...

I wonder??

Did the Earth open and swallow everyone?

I do think this place is haunted.. and  has frightened many away..still, sometimes late at night I can hear their pens scratching...

Listen. do you hear it?

© 2008 Chloe..Across the Universe


Author's Note

Chloe..Across the Universe
this place feels 'different'.. or is it just me?

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well, the site wouldhave to stay on-line more than it does for me to hear any pens scratching, we just sit and wait for the walls to crumble

Posted 15 Years Ago


No, it's not just you. With no moderators, it does make a difference. You use to be one, didn't you Chloe?? Do you know why they did away with that? I do miss the feel of things like around the time I first joined. I miss so many of the people that have left because of harassment. Gotta keep that stuff under control or sad to say, I don't think they will have a sight eventually. It has to be maintained to keep people interested and wanting to be here.

I love this write. Has a quaint feel to it. I hope you are well, my friend. (((Hugs))), Carole

Posted 16 Years Ago


loved the end and the whole feeling the story gives >)

Posted 16 Years Ago


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I loved it. I loved the funnyness and I loved everything about it

Posted 16 Years Ago


I like the way this 'place' is. The way that you can't see them but you hear them. I would like a world like that it would be more peaceful there.
Good write though.

Posted 16 Years Ago


I think that the powers that be made changes that drove most of the people who interacted away. It does indeed feel like a ghost town. Makes me sad.

Posted 16 Years Ago


I agree it gets quiet in here sometimes. Interesting thought that it may be haunted.

sorry - I had to giggle at these lines!


"Did the Blackbird lose her voice? Did Bubo break a nail? Has Rain drown in a deluge? Brighteyes eyes dim? Did Tammy tear her dress?.."

I crawled under a rock, myself. But I'm back now!


Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on April 16, 2008
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Chloe..Across the Universe
Chloe..Across the Universe

Smalltown, USA, AR



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Sometimes i feel like an alien in a strange land..can you relate? I love people and friends are just that to me , friends-if you request me as a friend it would be nice if you read something I have .. more..

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