Interesting imagery. I kind of feel cold already... which is a nice feeling considering the 101 degree heat where I'm living. :P
I personally think this is a very deep poem. Unfortunately, I can't really dig far below ground to tell you what it tells me, but I will say that you're really gifted with these images and figurative language you present us with. The vision you give me is a winter wasteland that is beautiful but terrible to dwell in... it's a stange sight, but I have to admit that I'm impressed with the result.
This is an excellent and highly descriptive poem with possibly one simple theme or many complex message. Great job and thanks for posting.
I like this poem. I met people who had nothing left to give. Poem story is powerful. I like the complete poem. Ain't good to die in heart and soul when life is still in our body. A outstanding poem.
Coyote
Interesting imagery. I kind of feel cold already... which is a nice feeling considering the 101 degree heat where I'm living. :P
I personally think this is a very deep poem. Unfortunately, I can't really dig far below ground to tell you what it tells me, but I will say that you're really gifted with these images and figurative language you present us with. The vision you give me is a winter wasteland that is beautiful but terrible to dwell in... it's a stange sight, but I have to admit that I'm impressed with the result.
This is an excellent and highly descriptive poem with possibly one simple theme or many complex message. Great job and thanks for posting.
This poem is so vivid and descriptive. I love the imagery I get while reading it. Very well-written, and it holds such a deep message! Keep up the good work!! =]
What a line
Like a pocket watch your grandfather gave you
dead and buried in the frozen earth
THAT is spectacular. It conveys not only something dead; but something long dead. Something that was passed on respectfully ; perhaps even hopefully and then disregarded. Something that had value and worth that was wasted and disrespected.
Those two lines so so much. wow.
Sometimes i feel like an alien in a strange land..can you relate?
I love people and friends are just that to me , friends-if you request me as a friend it would be nice if you read something I have .. more..