Shhh, Don't Wake Chloe

i'm out so shh let the silly girl sleep .. hehehe

    

 Look at her
sleeping
so angelic, ah
she speaks of love, peace
writes love poems
all hearts and flowers
roses and champagne
me, a weed and a beer will do
she makes me sick..Miss Goody Two Shoes..

Oh, let me introduce myself
this is Chloe
only the dark side of Chloe
and we all have a dark side, yes dear reader even you
you know you do

I have some things to say
she is too 'mealy mouthed' as her mother, our
would say,
oh, you don't know what mealy mouthed is?
It is having meal in your mouth
which causes you not to be able to talk..like
mush
still, she talks a lot
BUT
she does not say what needs to be said

I am tired of all the whiners and naggers
the thieves  and beggars she lets in her, our house
Down on their luck she says,they will only be here a short while
Ha Ha
I'd tell them to leave but she won't let me

Sick of her little peace and love, let's all help each other
cause it ain't workin'
Where is the peace?
in her, our, house there is no peace
there is no harmony
Lots of chaos
loud mouthed selfish people who walk all over her, me
if there can be no peace at home
how can there ever be peace in the world?
I don't see too many people boarding the peace train
what a silly girl

Oh, I think she may be waking, shhh...
have yet to finish my piece...
the person she sacrificed a part of her , our life for
sick or not he should be kicked out the door
she , we care for him, thank you?
NO
the middle finger as if it is her, our fault he is sick
What does little Chloe do..flashes the peace sign and tells him
everything is going to be just fine
HaHa

She keeps me well reigned
tonight though
I tricked her to sleep
made her mind think of all the worries and woes so she
got one of her famous panic attacks
had to take her little blue pills
so now she is fast asleep

Ah, so sweet
it is sickening to me
peace
love
harmony
the dark side of the moon
she's waking now
sleep she does little of
I hate her
I love her
she will kill me for this
but she knows
united we stand
divided we fall

Go back to sleep
Chloe and dream
of flowers  roses and champagne
while you are sleeping I can
play
my
Games
this poem she will hate
and I smoked the last cigarette

Shhh, don't wake Chloe
She's an angel when she sleeps
Peace
Love
Hearts
Flowers
I think
I may be sick
Don't wake Chloe
the taste is too saccharine



    

Author's Note

I looked for an hour for the reviews to this silly one .. there were some good ones. but i am about to fall asleep .. then SHe might come out .. lol
Sybil? Sybil who?
im kiddin!

Reviews

[Tai Chi Italy Take Two]

This is bloody brilliant Chloe, we all have the altra ego whispering in our ear and you nail the bar steward perfectly in wonderful read. this sweet chloe reminds me of myself and I like myself despite being a real b***h from hell at times, that's the altra ego real b***h....lol I am still full of love and most love me for it. The haters can f**k off!lol Grinning at you, LLB but stemming the flow of her ego!

[Tiffany Blair]

i feel you so much on this one being bipolar and all probably helps though.. but yeah, i am a beer kinda chic as well... and how can you not get mad at yourself for smoking the last cigarette..haha

[None]

What a great concept and a very enjoyable poem! It would be kind of weird to be totally perfect anyway. It's good to care but you can't be co-dependent or something. LOL. It's good to stand up for yourself and not pretend. You're poem is so different with the voice and I just love it! I'm saving this to favorites.

[OceanTropic]

united we stand
divided we fall

love this line

I liked this poem, we all have a dark side and although we can control it, it feels sometimes that we must let it out, and the whole blue pills thing, I love it

I especially loved how you kept repeting "her, me" and "hers, ours" talking about her but again reminding us that she is you also

[Emily B]

Aw, Chloe, we all have a dark side. . . I like the spunk and vinegar of this one.

[Belinda Rice]

we all have a side of us that doesent care sometime this was a great peace of work, you have written it so woderfuly i hope to see more

[BrightEyes]

ahhh believe me , I'm totally in touch with my dark side - perhaps it's my good side that lost the war? lol. Maybe I've found a way to make them get along, it's hard to tell. I loved this one - we all have so many sides to ourselves - whether dark or light - somehow we manage to rumble through life and I'm thinking all our sides have their place and come out to play when needed.

laura

[*** Hey Jude***]

This is such a creative write! I love the duality of your feelings that you have shown with such honesty. Refreshing. Thanks for sharing another part of Chloe

[Celtic Cat]

We really liked it. We are completely in touch with our dark side. In fact, she'd been in charge for a long time. I'm easing back in now....trying to be a good girl..stop doing things that are bad, unlawful. Sticking up for myself when I need to. I love this split personality peice...it's so human, so dualistic. It's true, it's so easy to put up the nice side and wear it for all to see....but those in denial of even having a good side will one day have their own day of reckoning. I learned to embrace the sadness like a lover...which is why it lasted so long, perhaps. But, everything has a place and some of my best work comes out of the dark side. Sorry I wasn't 'round sooner....hate the feeling of "waiting for reviews"!!! I've posted a few of those and WC never does disappoint. Much love, kindred soul, hold peace.

[Dezaraye]

This is awesome. I love it! I think that we all have this dark side w/i us. I fear that evil side of me ... I love the way you've written, this, it's just awesome.