Shhh, Don't Wake Chloe

i'm out so shh let the silly girl sleep .. hehehe

    

 Look at her
sleeping
so angelic, ah
she speaks of love, peace
writes love poems
all hearts and flowers
roses and champagne
me, a weed and a beer will do
she makes me sick..Miss Goody Two Shoes..

Oh, let me introduce myself
this is Chloe
only the dark side of Chloe
and we all have a dark side, yes dear reader even you
you know you do

I have some things to say
she is too 'mealy mouthed' as her mother, our
would say,
oh, you don't know what mealy mouthed is?
It is having meal in your mouth
which causes you not to be able to talk..like
mush
still, she talks a lot
BUT
she does not say what needs to be said

I am tired of all the whiners and naggers
the thieves  and beggars she lets in her, our house
Down on their luck she says,they will only be here a short while
Ha Ha
I'd tell them to leave but she won't let me

Sick of her little peace and love, let's all help each other
cause it ain't workin'
Where is the peace?
in her, our, house there is no peace
there is no harmony
Lots of chaos
loud mouthed selfish people who walk all over her, me
if there can be no peace at home
how can there ever be peace in the world?
I don't see too many people boarding the peace train
what a silly girl

Oh, I think she may be waking, shhh...
have yet to finish my piece...
the person she sacrificed a part of her , our life for
sick or not he should be kicked out the door
she , we care for him, thank you?
NO
the middle finger as if it is her, our fault he is sick
What does little Chloe do..flashes the peace sign and tells him
everything is going to be just fine
HaHa

She keeps me well reigned
tonight though
I tricked her to sleep
made her mind think of all the worries and woes so she
got one of her famous panic attacks
had to take her little blue pills
so now she is fast asleep

Ah, so sweet
it is sickening to me
peace
love
harmony
the dark side of the moon
she's waking now
sleep she does little of
I hate her
I love her
she will kill me for this
but she knows
united we stand
divided we fall

Go back to sleep
Chloe and dream
of flowers  roses and champagne
while you are sleeping I can
play
my
Games
this poem she will hate
and I smoked the last cigarette

Shhh, don't wake Chloe
She's an angel when she sleeps
Peace
Love
Hearts
Flowers
I think
I may be sick
Don't wake Chloe
the taste is too saccharine



    

Author's Note

I looked for an hour for the reviews to this silly one .. there were some good ones. but i am about to fall asleep .. then SHe might come out .. lol
Sybil? Sybil who?
im kiddin!

Reviews

[Tai Chi Italy Take Two]

This is bloody brilliant Chloe, we all have the altra ego whispering in our ear and you nail the bar steward perfectly in wonderful read. this sweet chloe reminds me of myself and I like myself despite being a real b***h from hell at times, that's the altra ego real b***h....lol I am still full of love and most love me for it. The haters can f**k off!lol Grinning at you, LLB but stemming the flow of her ego!

[Desert Dreamer]

Amazing! I love it! Time for a revolution! We should all open our mouths and speak the truth! (forgive the "!"s but your writing awakened my own dark side!) To be strong we must join all of our self into one, we are all made of many selves, some of them hidden. No silliness in your poem, but a deep truth. Back to the revolution issue...my hidden self keeps telling me that the path to peace and love is through revolution, that we must fight, no more standing back in peace watching our world be destroyed. After most of it is gone, who then will have the strength left to fight, and who will have the knowledge on how to live once things have changed. Ah..but my surface self says this is not the way, we must not fight but must stay quiet and hope the destroyers will see truth and stop destroying. I have more thoughts on your writing, but it is becoming too much, time to relax. :)

[Elizabeth]

This is fantastic! I can wholeheartedly relate. Nicely done!

[IMOGEAN]

I happen to be a bit mealy mouthed--myself, dear. This is a very telling piece and reveals just enough to make us ponder you, Chloe... I found myself identifying with some of your poetic ramblings. We are all so very different, and even more so, we are the same. This fact of similarity is why poetry is a universal language. I enjoyed this. Thank you.

Imogean~

[April Child]

So true! We all have more than one side, most definately yes. That would be something if the 'other' side crept out while we were sleeping, caused some havoc in our lives... maybe it does, there's a thought. Fun poem.

[zig]

i really liked the honestly of this poem, three dimensional, and a very strong sense of voice. the "whole" person resides in this poem... and speaks. great work. zig

[Blackbirdsong]

Glad you found this one again Chloe and I still love it. I wonder if it was freeing for you somehow to write this. We all have that inner voice who nags and bullies us about our decisions. Still I'd rather be thought of as being too good or too nice, than the opposite. Of course we all have to learn how to draw those boundaries in our lives. This feels like you're doing just that or are about to. It reads like a good rant, not just at yourself or sleeping Chloe. Lots of strength in this actually. The inner strength of both sides of you. I only saw one typo - panic attackd

:)

[An Ordinary Woman]

Bless your heart, Chloe! yeppers, we all have that side of us, some only manage to hide it better than others!
It gets me now and then too, but shhhh cause I don't say that often. LOL

Your such a delight, Chloe!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

This is so fantastic... yes we all have a dark side and there is a thin line separating them, but for most our conscience gets the best of us on the right side of the razors edge no matter how much we get stepped on... in the end we have to look ourselves in the mirror.

[Yira Simone]

You found this one!!! I recall this poem very well and I loved reading it as much the second time around as I did the first. This really showed how we all wear a mask, and pretend our lives away. Only the inner person inside us knows the REAL truth as to how we feel and think and know why we bullshit ourselves and others on a daily basis. Listen to the voices, but don obey! LOL-Catrina

[THE BLACK SEAL]

united we stand divided we fall.. thats from the father figues of america..lol
it is interesting. it is not my favorite of yours but i did enjoy it..thank you