Jumbled Thoughts

Jumbled Thoughts

A Story by Chloe..Across the Universe
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jumbled thoughts

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Where have all the cowboys gone?
Why are we here and what is the meaning of our exsistence?
Did Oswald have a partner in crime? Did the Kennedy's have Marilyn killed?

Is it raining where you are?
I adore rain .. according to the 'what kind of weather are you' quiz, i am rain..these silly quizzes so many of us display on our profile...
I love salad and apples and Donovan Drake..
And i love you ...love is the reason we are all here though we don't remember.
I remember you, do you remember me?
You left an imprint on my heart where it shall stay till sun meets earth and moonlight turns blood red.

Another school shooting .. la de da.. as in have we not somewhat become a little apathetic and complacent .. as if it is an every day occurance? Does seem  it is becoming so doesn't it?
This time a smiling young man .. didn't fit the normal profile .. normal profile? Normal porfile of a killer.
Just a guy on a killing mission .. good student ... had some troubles... cutting himself and refused to
take meds..Just a normal guy carrying a rifle in a guitar case, gonna sing his and others few last song . Seems no one talks much about this type of thing anymore. 

BUT... Brittany Spears, she is one sick chick and i feel she is headed for a showdown , a breakdown, a wreck running from the papparazi.. hope her kids are not with her should it happen.. oh, that's right... no kid visits for her..but Brittany.. so much attention, so many talking about her..Me, I feel sorry for the girl.. Thrust into the spotlight at an early age.. perhaps not by choice.. Knowing nothing but adoration and afriad to lose her place in the spotlight, lime-light ..so she takes all of the 
publicity she can get..and she loses touch with reality as people take advantage of her.

We are messed up a bit it seems to me .. not you reading this .. perhaps not you ,, we as a society ..
Failing grade.. F ..... 

Ozone is sucking me into it's big black abyss... gotta go ...


 

© 2008 Chloe..Across the Universe


Author's Note

Chloe..Across the Universe
rambling

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I guess you have saved me from listening to the news or buying a newspaper today. I always wonder why at the end of the news they never say about us all being so messed up - maybe it's the thought that if they did and everyone lived in bliss, they would be out of a job.

You are right in saying love is the reason we are all here. Shame that most of the time love seems to be hiding somewhere. I think you are safe to stick with your salad and apples and Donovan Drake though!


Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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Brilliantly expressed flow of consciousness. You have pegged the media perfectly. Well done.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Love the rambling!!! Kerouac was famous for it and the nuggets of wisdom and playfullness in yours are the same for our time as his were for his...Great expository! ~B

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Actually, this is a ramble that's probably going through many minds at this moment, asking, " What is with all of the school shootings?" "What in the hell is going on with Britney Spears?", and many other things. Plus, the reason why I liked this ramble because it's so true and thought provoking.

Nice job. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I always love it when you ramble like this. It feels as if we're having a conversation and jumping from topic to topic because there is just so much on our minds. I agree with you about Britney Spears...just the same every time I hear your name lately I cringe.

Great job :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

I guess you have saved me from listening to the news or buying a newspaper today. I always wonder why at the end of the news they never say about us all being so messed up - maybe it's the thought that if they did and everyone lived in bliss, they would be out of a job.

You are right in saying love is the reason we are all here. Shame that most of the time love seems to be hiding somewhere. I think you are safe to stick with your salad and apples and Donovan Drake though!


Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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Sometimes i feel like an alien in a strange land..can you relate? I love people and friends are just that to me , friends-if you request me as a friend it would be nice if you read something I have .. more..

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