gone in seconds flat!

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A Poem by Chloe..Across the Universe

Here today
gone tomorrw
seems the way we roll r0und here

Writings deleted
Damn, I feel cheated
they were filled with
my 
blood 
sweat and tears

tho some got jeers ( i admit)

I'll never have the same recipe again
I will forget to add something 
they will not be the same

Oh, well
here today
gone tomorrow
that's how we roll
round here

Bye bye writings
sorry to see you go
miss you!
Silly mindless ramblings
pieces of heart and soul

Sad to see you go.....

© 2008 Chloe..Across the Universe


Author's Note

Chloe..Across the Universe
Silliness.. to keep from crying ..lol

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Aww Chloe, I hope you didn't loose them all. I feel so sad for those who did. Luckily mine was all safely backed up but I know I wouldn't have taken it so good if it wasn't
My thoughts are with the guys who did, 'cause our words are like part of our soul by losing them so many lost a part of who they are and you are so right even if you tried they would never come out the same again if you tried to rewrite them

Posted 16 Years Ago


5 of 5 people found this review constructive.




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I am so sorry you lost all your work. I feel really bad for you and all that have lost their words like that. I am just glad to see that you haven't given up on the site that makes me happy to know you are still here and still standing strong. I liked you piece I could feel you sadness and hurt in your words loud and clear. I hope you are able to remember most of your stuff and able to post them.

Wishing you well!!!!!!



Posted 16 Years Ago


it's so true my dear...nothing is really permanent anyway...we aren't that's for sure...still this is a tragedy and hopefully we'll all learn not to trust technology so much in the future.

*HUGS*

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Perfect.

Thanks for this one. We all needed it. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I think that's pretty much what everyone are thinking.
Thank you for putting it into words, in such a greatly written piece.

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Aww Chloe, I hope you didn't loose them all. I feel so sad for those who did. Luckily mine was all safely backed up but I know I wouldn't have taken it so good if it wasn't
My thoughts are with the guys who did, 'cause our words are like part of our soul by losing them so many lost a part of who they are and you are so right even if you tried they would never come out the same again if you tried to rewrite them

Posted 16 Years Ago


5 of 5 people found this review constructive.

I needed this lady. Thank you. :-) I know. I still have most of mine, but there was one or two that were special that I forgot to copy. Probably not to anyone else, mind you...just me. I know Charlie feels bad though...What can we say?

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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Chloe..Across the Universe
Chloe..Across the Universe

Smalltown, USA, AR



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