This was cool how you intertwined the song titles with the rest of your writings. I really enjoyed and still do for that matter, it was a tragic waste. T
Although I find Kurt Cobain overrated, no that he wasn't good but not as great as many believe him to be this poem is an excellant piece interwoven of music and passion... you have tremendous skill my friend.
What a painful truth you write about. Someone so talented, dying so young is hard to make any sense of at all. You have woven a beautiful touching tribute to Kurt Cobain. Very Nice! ~ N
Chloe, I watch a show on Nirvana too a while back. It really is a sad story. You really personalized this and pieced it together perfectly. Good job with this.
This brought back a lot of memories for me about Kurt Cobain and Nirvana. I remember when he killed himself and I was just so shocked as I guess everyone else was too. Yes, you could see the pain in his eyes and there are still questions lingering about what could have been done to help him. You tell a great story my dear and you're not dumb at all. And I wish you all the happiness in the world.
i like how you talk about Kurt cobain, insert his famous pieces and then you turn around and make the poem personal, "am I really happy." especially if you are watching cobain. lol.
This was cool how you intertwined the song titles with the rest of your writings. I really enjoyed and still do for that matter, it was a tragic waste. T
This really blew me away! I'm still such a huge fan of his music. He truly made an impact in the short amount of time -in the music world- he was around. The music from back in the early 90's is still fueling, the newer bands even now.
This is a decent enough tribute, and I think I am able to read this with an unbiased approach.
There are a couple typos, nothing to trip up over, and I like that you spun his lyrics through out. He did help push "grunge" to the forefront...but to be honest, I really didn't care much for Nirvana....I was more fond of Mudhoney, Screaming Trees, Sonic Youth, Pearl Jam, etc....
I can't say that he spoke for me...but I know of others who would really really like the piece.
I like it for the way it flowed seamlessly. You did well with what little you had of his life.
Yeah, Sad happening really. Tragic that he went through life that way. His music still lives on, and he had good messages that are just easy to twist around. Great tribute to him Chloe.
Sometimes i feel like an alien in a strange land..can you relate?
I love people and friends are just that to me , friends-if you request me as a friend it would be nice if you read something I have .. more..