Beauty in Pain

You so easily brushed it off like leaves on your porch.

Rubbed the brightness out of the sunshine that was once radiated on me.

You pushed in the sadness that follows you and it caused my head to spin.

It left ripples through my thoughts.

Relief of finally releasing your grasp is in my future.

A time that I will be able to finally breath and forget your taunt.

A need to not think of you.

Reviews

[Relic's Bare Trees]

The tightness of the rope that keeps us bound to another despite the cold truth of love's desertion is hard to take for anyone who gave so much for them. Your second line--"Rubbed the brightness out of the sunshine that was once radiated on me," is quite a creative way of explaining your feelings. Releasing the grasp is a slow process that shouldn't be thought of as impossible if the length of time it takes to do it seems like a chain attached to the soul. It can be done and I believe you'll move on and learn from it.

[Lovely Pattie]

Thank you very much. I appreciate your words. I enjoy when someone realizes what i am feeling through my words.

[Relic's Bare Trees]

There is somewhat of a universal predicament we all go through although each is unique in some way.

[Lovely Pattie]

Absolutely true. It is why we can relate because we have experienced it at some point.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Such a heartfelt poem,I felt your emotion in this* Part of me could relate to the poem. Very well written :)

[Lovely Pattie]

Thank you. I am happy you could feel what i said. Thanks for the kind words.