Reaching for your thoughts

It has been an obvious minute so to speak that I have written. 

Today is a day of many mental thoughts through music.

I breath in the intake of the sounds and I begin to flow with each tap of each finger with words. 

The need to release its intense pulsation through my body through this page is a requirement. 

I begin to ache to show you in these sentences my need and my forever torture of this demand of me. 

The song is played over and over so I can keep feeling what it keeps doing to me. 

It shows me an opening, a gap that is spilling the thoughts through. 

I want to reach and touch the words as they release through your lips. 

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Reviews

[ron]

Wonderful poem. This is how I feel when a song or a though take me and won't let me go until I write it out of my body.

[Lovely Pattie]

Thank you Ron. You worded that so lovely. It wont let me go until I write it out. I love that.

[ron]

You are most welcome.

[Sami Khalil]

It shows me an opening, a gap that is spilling the thoughts through.

I want to reach and touch the words as they release through your lips.




"It shows me an opening, a gap that is spilling the thoughts through.

I want to reach and touch the words as they release through your lips."

A beautiful , well written poem...Bravo..............

[Lovely Pattie]

Thank you. That means very much to me that you could feel it.

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:).......................