Hurt Me One More Time

Hurt Me One More Time

A Poem by Lovely Pattie



I am a broken person

I tend to disrupt the uninterrupted 

There is an itch inside of me that aches to be scratched

I have to yell at myself for my thoughts because they tend to cause trouble in my real life

I go deep inside myself and at times its hard to come back out

The want I have starts digging itself out of me 

Completely tainted and troubled

Its hard to be a woman

You want to give a man so much and you tend to give him your heart and there you are reminiscing on his body, his touch, his taste, his kiss, and his love

He is stuck inside of you and never digs his way out

He stays there inside of you, never leaving

All you can do is endure the pain over and over

You try to forget but you cant

The fish hook stays latched

If only we could pull out the things that hurt us 

If only we could have the things that hurt us

If only the thing that hurt me would come back to me then I could touch it again and feel it again 

It does me no good embedded inside of me if I cant touch it 

I want it gone but then do I really 




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B.J
Such deep words very intense

Posted 10 Years Ago


The fish hook stays latched

If only we could pull out the things that hurt us

Amazing with your words you invite your readers deep inside your heart

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely Pattie

10 Years Ago

Well put. Thats so true
A. Amos

10 Years Ago

I love the writers who write on their own terms and your one of them
Lovely Pattie

10 Years Ago

You made my day. Thank you
Wow...youve touched on a truth that most of us dont speak of. Despite the pain inflicted by a love we still want it back. Part of that is because they are always inside of us...an embedded part. Very aptly put. Your words ache..

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lovely Pattie

10 Years Ago

Thank you. My luck with men tends to make me adhere to the way they are and then i end up broken.

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