Jump into the splash of its pain

We fluster around like children failing to realize that those are the days that are meant for the anything.

Love runs up on you when you least expect it. Its up to you to grab a hold of it or run from it. 

When you run its because there is something that has broken you. 

Pick up the pieces and try again. 

Run your fingers through the taste of it.  

If you let it soak in then and only then can you understand its beauty.  

Remember that we all need something or someone to grab a hold of. 

Hopeless Romantic is etched inside of my skull. 

Pain is right along side of it for I cannot run from it. 

I sit in it, marinating its fumes inside of my being, forgetting that I am strong. 

I let it all go and I am swallowed through and through. 

I cant let go. 

I wont let go. 

I am hopeless.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Fantastico...Thank you for sharing...:)....................

[Lovely Pattie]

Thanks for reading

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)....................

[The Girl Who Loved Too ..]

I can feel these words inside of me." I can't let go. I won't let go. I am hopeless." It's like I wrote them myself. Great read and thank you for sharing.

[Lovely Pattie]

Your welcome. I am glad you could feel them. That was my intent. :)

[redflutterby]

Truth in each line....the last three especially! Good work Pattie!

[Lovely Pattie]

Thanks sweets. Love is a mother sucker.

[redflutterby]

Amen on that one sister!! Lol...

[ron]

Run your fingers through the taste of it.
Hopeless Romantic is etched inside of my skull.
I let it all go and I am swallowed through and through.
I cant let go.
I wont let go.
I am hopeless.

That's how I feel sometimes. Fantastic poem.

[Lovely Pattie]

Thank you. I think being a hopeless romantic is what causes all these words to fill the page. :)

[ron]

I know the feeling. I'm a hopeless romantic to. Yes it can cause a lot of emotion to spill onto the page through ink colored thoughts written with the hearts own pen.

[Lovely Pattie]

Yes exactly. It inflicts so much into the words we write.

[Lovely Pattie]

And yes very hopeless :)

[ron]

You have a wonderful way with words Pattie :)

[Lovely Pattie]

Thanks Ron, that made my day, my month, my year. :)

[ron]

You are most welcome :)

[Mrs Meggins]

I am planning my second fluster hood?

Nice, deep and emotional.

[Lovely Pattie]

Thank you.

[B.J]

wow another intense piece the last 3 lines deep

[Lovely Pattie]

Thank you so much Barb.

[B.J]

Your welcome

[Shaquana Adams]

"I sit in it, marinating its fumes inside of my being, forgetting that I am strong.
I let it all go and I am swallowed through and through. "

Beautiful lines. Nice job! :)

[Lovely Pattie]

Thank you very much. I am glad i found a site that i can share my words.