The Blind

The Blind

A Poem by Steel Magnolia

The Blind

 

Its veil had long since
revealed its secrets
Still - she peers through
the tear of the blind
ever hopeful
that today
he will tender the maiden’s hair
and cup dandelions
in the palm of his hand.

© 2023 Steel Magnolia


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I like the hopeful tone of this poem; waiting and watching in the hope that her desired will covet her lovingly as a husband should to his wife. It's a beautiful hope to have and despairing to wait patiently for. A lovely poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Steel Magnolia

1 Year Ago

Appreciate your comments Makhabat - thank you

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Steel Magnolia
Steel Magnolia

Sydney, NSW, Australia



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