What must I do?

What must I do?

A Poem by Patrick Daniel
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when you're not sure where you're going in life. You might be able to relate.

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A day locked away tells me more then I care for,
So mundane and insane my heart falls apart,
Bored to death with every breath, yet an unlocked door I won't explore,
I sit in my tomb while nature's in bloom, I can't seem to care even though I do stare,
I'm puzzled by this, ignorant bliss, Even though I wan't more, I cannot ignore,
How I ask why as life passes by I'm in desperation to escape isolation.

© 2014 Patrick Daniel


Author's Note

Patrick Daniel
Not a traditional rhyme scheme I know.

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Sounds like a feeling I know of. Reminds me of those days when I am bored and unsatisfied with what I am doing but I don't have the motivation or desire to do anything....so then I sit there and contemplate why I subject myself to the same isolated routine every day. Very relatable. Different rhyme scheme for sure but it is fun to experiment.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Sounds like a feeling I know of. Reminds me of those days when I am bored and unsatisfied with what I am doing but I don't have the motivation or desire to do anything....so then I sit there and contemplate why I subject myself to the same isolated routine every day. Very relatable. Different rhyme scheme for sure but it is fun to experiment.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

And there's a lot of grammar issues, but this was more of an experiment.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Patrick Daniel
Patrick Daniel

Redlands, CA



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I'm an un-published writer currently working on a novel, who also likes to write poems in his spare time. I also post short stories from time to time. more..

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