I would love you.

A poem I wrote not too long ago.

I would love you until the end of our days,

even if you had scars, I would love you anyways.

I would hold onto you tightly as if to say,

" I can't bare to lose you, please don't slip away".

I would write you love songs so you could remember,

my love for the times when we're not together.

I would take you away from your pain when I could,

I would give you your space whenever I should.

I would kiss you goodnight whenever we parted,

I would forget every fight as if it never started.

I would kiss you on the hand even though its old fashioned,

I'm not sure how else to express my compassion.

I would hold you in public to show to the world,

how ecstatic I am that you are my girl.

I would trace my fingers across your sweet smile,

and whisper sweet words to you once in a while.

I would give you a token of my adoration,

flowers and chocolates for every occasion.

I may not always remember to do these things,

but I would always remember the joy your love brings.

I would give you my heart only if you would too,

I would say that I love you if you love me too.

Author's Note

I'm not very much of a poet, so this is one of my first attempts at writing poetry. Please keep this in mind if you write a review.

Reviews

[Germany Rose]

If you are in a developed relationship right now; this would certainly make whoever you love smile.

For one of your first attempts into the delve within the lovable world of poetry--I think it is quite enjoyable. Especially with the tone that it does set with all of the sweet things that a relationship can hold. It also brings a lost art into the playing field--and that is appreciation for the one your with, which is priceless.

[breanna felt]

This is too sweet. I like the fact that there are people out there that can still be romantic. Keep writing friend.