Wilt

She, like the winter comes and takes everything except the warmth you give

I  was a tree that bore bountiful fruit

every season exactly like the last until

she, the daughter of the north wind came

bringing her hounds Winter and Famine with her

and when they had had their fill, desecrating my frame

they departed, taking my fruit

thus for another i have since yet to bore any

Author's Note

Something I wrote a while ago.

Reviews

[Mari' Emeraude]

Very nice. The harsh season that came upon the more delicate one. I hate winter so that's how I feel when it reeks havoc on my dear autumn!!

[Patrick Schultz]

I like that you use both literal and metaphorical examples for your review haha without realizing ( unless you did it on purpose which just means you're sharp ) thank you ! :)

[Mari' Emeraude]

I'm busted cuz I didn't have a clue that I did that! ;p My ignorance is showing lol

[Patrick Schultz]

Ahahaha even better that you didn't know. Makes for a better metaphor ey?

[Mari' Emeraude]

yes, metaphorically speaking ;p

[Patrick Schultz]

You and this comment are golden lool