This is an interesting poem, in its format and content. I am not sure about the slave verse though. Offering your body? That implies agreement. Their misuse and abuse I should think is against their will. But if it 'unleashes power', I suppose that is good. I did enjoy reading this thought provoking poem, though.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Yes, consent is implicit in the word "offering," although it's not directly stated. I suppose, thou.. read moreYes, consent is implicit in the word "offering," although it's not directly stated. I suppose, though, that poetically purpose could even be drawn out of the "misuse and abuse," just as the Biblical poet says that the "evil" have been "purposed" for the "Day of Destruction." One hopes that is always poetic, as it is uncomfortable to think of freedom being taken away.
This is an interesting poem, in its format and content. I am not sure about the slave verse though. Offering your body? That implies agreement. Their misuse and abuse I should think is against their will. But if it 'unleashes power', I suppose that is good. I did enjoy reading this thought provoking poem, though.
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Yes, consent is implicit in the word "offering," although it's not directly stated. I suppose, thou.. read moreYes, consent is implicit in the word "offering," although it's not directly stated. I suppose, though, that poetically purpose could even be drawn out of the "misuse and abuse," just as the Biblical poet says that the "evil" have been "purposed" for the "Day of Destruction." One hopes that is always poetic, as it is uncomfortable to think of freedom being taken away.
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