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Dark Secrets

Dark Secrets

A Poem by Paddy
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I wish i didnt have my dark secrets... Just something i came up with while listening to a song :)

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Secrets chained within memory,

Occasionally revealed to the naked eye,

To show the deep dark secrets,

That hide in the depth of our heart,

Unwilling to be seen or heard,

Afraid of the truth “getting out”,

Oh, How I wish I didn’t have,

These deep dark secrets. 

© 2011 Paddy


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Excellent wordmanship, and having it all speak volumes on very few lines. Quite a feat of writing and articulation. It's sultry dark qualities are seductively enticing which allow the theme to be elevated into another lever of beauty in its communication. Thank you very much for sharing your poetry with us.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Im so sorry, i wish i didn't have them either, but really nice poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on April 11, 2011
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Paddy
Paddy

Suzhou, Jiang Su, China



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Yea, sure, i may only come on this site occasionally but i still love to read and write. Honestly, haha, if you do say my work sucks...well theres not much i can do unless you tell me how to improv.. more..

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