When the sun goes down

When the sun goes down

A Poem by Patrick Jeremiah

I've tried to open your mind,
I've tried hard screaming to your ear
but all you heard was less than a whisper

All of these songs have written for you, just for you

Now everything has changed
All I see is black clouds covering the sky that gonna pour a rainstorm
All I now that you left with the fake smile

My heart neither bleed nor cry
it stopped

I'm begging for the flakes, that eventually swept away
praying on my knees, that I could touch you

where is love, where is the thing that we used to stare in each one's eyes
I found that has full of dust on every side

Now the sun went down, the cloud cry through the dark of night
That's where I am, awake from what happened
I remember when the sun went down, nothing could stop it
I remember when the cloud cry, there isn't always rainbow following

© 2016 Patrick Jeremiah


Author's Note

Patrick Jeremiah
sorry for the english, not my primary language lol.... comment if there is something wrong with the grammar

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Patrick Jeremiah
Patrick Jeremiah

Banten, Tangerang Selatan, Indonesia



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I love writing, I write by heart, mind and reality. I'm a songwriter, a poet and an architecture student. more..

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