HURRY!

HURRY!

A Poem by Patrick JL
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There once was a hermit named Dave.

Who had      er       aa 

Oppppsssss   wrong site for that one.

Sorry I can’t think of any poetry I can post around here. So let’s post a story. Quick!!! Someone pick a topic. First topic picker gets ………….er…………a………..to be the topic picker.

© 2017 Patrick JL


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THERE IS A WINNER!!! Er…….a……. topic picker. OK "Time" it is.

I once heard that time is sneaking up on us all. So I guessed that to be correct. Now at 67 I know it is.

But to arrive dead with a perfectly shaped body and skin wrinkles stretched flat seems a waste. I say "Party Till You Puke!" and "Pass The Prune Juice!"



Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rana

7 Years Ago

Yayyyyyyyy



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THERE IS A WINNER!!! Er…….a……. topic picker. OK "Time" it is.

I once heard that time is sneaking up on us all. So I guessed that to be correct. Now at 67 I know it is.

But to arrive dead with a perfectly shaped body and skin wrinkles stretched flat seems a waste. I say "Party Till You Puke!" and "Pass The Prune Juice!"



Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rana

7 Years Ago

Yayyyyyyyy
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Post any old shite, it will get read, perhaps not reviewed, but until it's out there you'll never know

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Time? Is that a good topic. Any genre!

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Amazing poem wonderful flow.your poem is best.

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Patrick JL

7 Years Ago

Thank You for your kind words. Too bad your topic-less. Must be medical. But I bet there's help, or .. read more

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I have been tolded I should write. Of course this was by folks, bound by civilization, to baste my ego. They insisted the cyber ether was the place to begin. This seemed as good a place as any to .. more..

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