Word Brittle

Word Brittle

A Story by Patrick JL
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Say hello when you can.

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He pilots his rake like it’s made of peanut brittle. The movements are slow and delicate so it will not shatter.   As each pedestrian approaches his effort slows to a complete stop. He is not in their way nor are they in his. 

He is ready with his peanut brittle welcoming. His words are slow and delicate. If his greeting were to go unanswered, or worse yet ignored, his words would be smashed at their feet. They would be ashamed to watch him clean up the word-brittle pile.

The day’s raking is over. He takes his peanut brittle life to his peanut brittle shack and recounts the day’s conversations.  In his sleeping, he dreams and his sleeping smile is slow and delicate. There were no piles of ‘Hello’s” to clean up today.

© 2015 Patrick JL


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Added on April 25, 2015
Last Updated on April 27, 2015
Tags: pilot, rake, pedestrian, brittle, life, dream, delicate, hello

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Patrick JL
Patrick JL

PDX, OR



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I have been tolded I should write. Of course this was by folks, bound by civilization, to baste my ego. They insisted the cyber ether was the place to begin. This seemed as good a place as any to .. more..

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