I only wish all of those beautiful dreams could come true...you definitely see the brighter side of this universe... your words bring us hope and togetherness, without the bitter divide we have now "A leader who believes in the brilliance of many stars" a land where we are all equal... your words always shine dearest Pat
Warmly, B
dear Betty,,, we are hoping that whomever our Leaders may be.. that they will experience a Conversio.. read moredear Betty,,, we are hoping that whomever our Leaders may be.. that they will experience a Conversion and encourage our Nation to once again be a "Shining Light on the Hill" with our Flag unfurled with Dreams of the Home of the Free and the Brave. Amen. softly, Pat
i always cast my eyes across a horizon and find freedom and bliss. that we may not lose our dreams, that we maintain hope that a better tomorrow may come, is imperative to creating a peaceful world.
dear Thomas... our World is coming together like Birds of a feather. Your Review is encouraging as .. read moredear Thomas... our World is coming together like Birds of a feather. Your Review is encouraging as we struggle for Peace and Prosperity. Amen... Pat
Very interesting Work Pat, I love the zest and energy in this Piece. Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️
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dear Red93... zest and energy is derived from a good cup of Tea perhaps. If enough poets encourage .. read moredear Red93... zest and energy is derived from a good cup of Tea perhaps. If enough poets encourage others... there may be a way to see more clearly... gently, Pat
This poem carries a strong sense of hope and aspiration, using vibrant imagery to create a picture of a collective, harmonious future. I especially appreciate the metaphor of “dreams painted on the horizon” — it evokes a sense of possibility and optimism that really draws the reader in. The use of “pallet of feelings” and “brilliance of many stars” gives the poem a celestial, almost otherworldly tone, which fits well with the visionary themes you're exploring.
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dear Crisham.. we need to explore possibilities before time ceases to be… we are Stars that shine .. read moredear Crisham.. we need to explore possibilities before time ceases to be… we are Stars that shine the brightest when the Sky is the darkest. Peace and Dreams. softly, Pat
Oh Wow ... make it so. I absolutely connect with the sentiment here. Wonderful.
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dearest Pryde. you are so comforting and seem to know the warmth of sharing possibilities of compr.. read moredearest Pryde. you are so comforting and seem to know the warmth of sharing possibilities of compromise and blue Skies... my friend.. Pat
The hope is strong with this beautiful writing
let's all hope for better days ..& a bright
Future once again for all to rejoice ..l
love your ending lines...... poetically expressed
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dearest Fran... sorry to be late with my reply; however, we are witnessing a change in compromise if.. read moredearest Fran... sorry to be late with my reply; however, we are witnessing a change in compromise if the very Wise can understand tha most of us want a Country for the People to be involved in decisions also. Thanks for an understanding Review. softly, Pat
"Change in a World of
collective cooperation... "
if only we could achieve this Pat, how lovely our world would be, it's the impossible dream really but maybe one day when something big happens to our planet we will realize that we do all need to help one another back to a better future.
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dearest Sheila... you see very clearly... I do believe that we have experienced some bad things happ.. read moredearest Sheila... you see very clearly... I do believe that we have experienced some bad things happening. Perhaps we may be on the Road to Recovery. Prayer is Powerful and the Spirit is with us.
Thanks for sharing. Pat
I keep trying to catch those dreams Pat, but the horizon always stays where it is. I even tried running backwards to catch it on the next lap, but it's sneaky and knows all the tricks.
I do believe there is an infinity of hope there, we just have to think collectively to try to grasp it when we can. Then share it out and not to be greedy, as humans are known to be at times.
"It's easy if you try 🎶 " someone once sang. 😃
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dearest Lorry... I love your attitude ... it seems there are dreams that could come true. Climbing .. read moredearest Lorry... I love your attitude ... it seems there are dreams that could come true. Climbing a Mountain is difficult; however the View will be Beautiful. gently, Pat
Life is like a River that includes the sound of Warblers among the trees laden with happiness and tears... Wings take us to places we discover and people who write the Music we love to hear... quietly.. more..