Watermelon Days with Sunny Rays

Watermelon Days with Sunny Rays

A Poem by Patricia Wedel

Hot Summer Days where Children play along 
the Shore where Seagulls fly above the Waves... 
Sand dollars are worth more than nuggets of Gold 
Picnic Baskets that Mothers brought with 
Cold drinks and  sandwiches... 
will now be replaced with Chrysanthemums 
when Autumn arrives...  Amen 

© 2024 Patricia Wedel


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Dear Pat, you create the most beautiful memories, ones to hold close - as all the best ones are.
I recall times like that when the family was complete with splash and sun, picnic - Summer at its very best. Soon - as you rightly say, comes the Chrysanthemums, the depth of their colours - plus their perfume. For me there is nothing better than that .. its earthy, real and long, lasting wonderful!

Helpline busy.. wish I could give out a few bunches! Thank you for sharing yet another of your lovely poetry. Love to you and Roger, hoping time will be kind to you this week.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Months Ago

dearest EmmaJoy.. you are the epitome of Heart ♥️ and Soul.. to make us feel whole. You take Ti.. read more
emmajoygreen

3 Months Ago

How very kind. Some say otherwise, Pat.. depends on what and how they think. Can but try. Yes? C.. read more



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Sand dollars are worth more than nuggets of Gold

Your work is always such a wonderful walk in a virtual garden. Sand dollars are worth more than their mercantile namesake ... I agree:)

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Months Ago

dearest Pryde... so wonderful to hear from you... as though I have travelled far to knock on your Do.. read more
Wonderful depictions and hopeful instructions.
You blend poetry with mesmerizing beauty.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Months Ago

dearest Sami... the Crepe Myrtle Trees still have blossoms which seem to be Kisses until they sleep .. read more
Sami Khalil

3 Months Ago

Kisses are plentiful and needed for everything. You are welcome.
Patricia, your brevity speaks volumes of crisp emotions that warms one's ears and made me reach for some light that I could literally grasp and hold dear. So simple in verse, but profound in heart.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Months Ago

dear Poet Miller... your review has been a bouquet of Gladiolas... as they bring Joy and Generosity .. read more
Love this one Pat it evokes memories in us all I’m sure

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Months Ago

dear Julie.. Watermelons are the most refreshing Treat.. especially in the Heat. Be Cool in the Sh.. read more
The scenes you depict are reflective of the seasons and how apt is the title watermelon days.. nice imagery Pat.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Months Ago

dearest Andrew... a Watermelon gives us many Seeds to share in Deeds of Harmony. Be Brave and Pray .. read more
Dear Pat, you create the most beautiful memories, ones to hold close - as all the best ones are.
I recall times like that when the family was complete with splash and sun, picnic - Summer at its very best. Soon - as you rightly say, comes the Chrysanthemums, the depth of their colours - plus their perfume. For me there is nothing better than that .. its earthy, real and long, lasting wonderful!

Helpline busy.. wish I could give out a few bunches! Thank you for sharing yet another of your lovely poetry. Love to you and Roger, hoping time will be kind to you this week.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

3 Months Ago

dearest EmmaJoy.. you are the epitome of Heart ♥️ and Soul.. to make us feel whole. You take Ti.. read more
emmajoygreen

3 Months Ago

How very kind. Some say otherwise, Pat.. depends on what and how they think. Can but try. Yes? C.. read more

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Patricia Wedel

Keystone, WV



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