Your Iconic Valentine

She speaks like Thunder and sings like Rain... 

There is Lightening in her Smile and a 

Rainbow in her Eyes... 

Whenever the Wind passes through her Hair 

the Flowers bloom without a Care... 

She herself is vulnerable to the Whispers of 

Persuasion as Mischief of a Wink becomes an aphrodisiac... 

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

There is a combination of daring and wistfulness in your Valentine poem, dear Pat. Especially smiled and nodded at -

'She herself is vulnerable to the Whispers of
Persuasion as Mischief of a Wink becomes an aphrodisiac... '

You have a wise perspective of Woman when she needs show both femininity AND determination !

(Sorry to have missed this great poem on the day, Pat.)

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Em... let us begin the Beguine as Romance is discovered among the Ripples of Anticipation... and the Treasure of a Pearl. softly, Pat

[JessyJacob]

she walks in rain getting wet with polythene

he offers her life umbrella in his office for a bio

she gets hold of his office as if hugging him to get oily

he watches her hidingly while working

she comes for him early and leaves late to feel his presence

she doesnt pay attention but she knows she is in his hands hugging him

as she manages both work and romance with him, 

he thinks she is not even thinking of him though. 

Happy Valentines .....

[JessyJacob]

Hi pat, you didnt reoly to my above message, you dont even want tl widh me??

[JessyJacob]

Wish* .

[Patricia Wedel]

Wishing you a 💜 Heart of perfect Peace … Amen

[JessyJacob]

Thank you ❤️🩷

[JessyJacob]

why do you want to confuse me call coommmeeee, throw every s**t you eat from, no sir, better bee where you areeee.

[JessyJacob]

i left him a gift at his own desk

but left without even looking at it

it stays there till he touches and eats or being thrown in trash

by people as they think it is expired

but no one knows how much that heart spent on getting for him

a life struggle, eons time of love adored to him.

a sacrifice no one cared for.

a blessing for him though he fucked her out for other.

not a coward she needed.

she is like Laila who got buried in bricks alive for expressing her love,

not a cunning woman who waited for people hitting bucket.

[JessyJacob]

there is lot of difference between, who thinks people to die and who thinks makes wishes true with waiting. i know, this is still 21 st century. a decade difference doesnt change your attitude when your own sibling is better than you though younger to you. it is just cunningness not a westernisation or catholism. It is Christianity, rewriting it, a holy spirit who really cares for.

[Patricia Wedel]

I understand the World and Spirituality to a degree… always learning…

[JessyJacob]

nice to know you are learning.

[Re-Pete]

wow. brilliant. certainly "iconic. she's really something. sounds like she could be the mother of nature. a box of chocolates are good too ... :)

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Pete…. The very early morning of Valentines … sleepy eyes reading your Review of a Valentine Moon that I actually viewed during the Night … wishing you 💜 a Heart of perfect Peace and ❤️ Love. gently, Pat

[Lorry]

That sounded like the opening for a piece that you could have easily called Lorrys sunday, without the afro-dizzy-act! 😊
But thank you for reminding me i have to go spend my ten pounds (her idea, not mine. She says it makes you try harder and i just got her to put it up from five pounds, which she agreed to because she saw a book i wanted for £8. And dont worry, she spends exactly 10 pounds so im expecting a bag of penny sweets too (which thanks to cost of living are now 5p each... For a penny sweetie? The world has gone mad.
It may be a well timed reminder this year, with wars spreading over the map, to let love win, for a day at least.
And i hope if cupids arrows fall, it isnt as painful as it sounds and heals well from the intrusion! 😊

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Lorry… the Sun is shining on Valentines and Birds are arriving to Dine,.. Sweethearts and Tarts entwine with Berry 🍷 Happy Valentines… 💘 Pat

[Betty Hermelee]

I really like the line “ whispers of persuasion…’.. very sensual indeed , and appropriate for Valentines Day, yet all of these soft , vivid images, are equally appropriate and are typically yours……your “wild “ woman has much lightening in her character, especially her smile…..
Warmly, B

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Betty… my Hungarian Ancestors have given me the Art of Romantic Roses where Petals fall upon the Storms of Passions Symphonies with a Burst of Cymbals when ❤️ Hearts Collide… dear Valentine… Adventure Arrives…. tenderly, Pat

[Betty Hermelee]

You're very Welcome dear Pat, Happy Valentine
with romantic overtones....
Warmly, B

[Neville]

this is very special Pat .. and is now quite possibly my very favouwritest of your posts to date ma'am .. Neville

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Neville… thou Art 🖼️ a Lover of Passion when Cupid 💘 arrives and Kisses awake the Embers of Desire. tenderly, Pat

[Dave Brown]

Cupid may look a bit off in his white diapers, however his heart couldn't be more perfectly positioned

[Patricia Wedel]

Hot and bothered when Valentines become a Lovers Brothel of Butterflies 🦋… secretly, Pat

[Poetic Beauty]

This reminds me a gypsy wild and carefree without thought to what others think. I can picture a woman running through a field of wildflower away from the city. Enjoying the sun; as someone special watches in aww and gives a simple wink in acknowledgment

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Beauty... the gremlins messed with my recent response.. so here is another thank you for your charming Review. My Father's family were Hungarian Gypsies and I admire their Romantic ways of expressing their Passion. Golden Rings and dancing in the Buttercups in Spring. gently, Pat

[Poetic Beauty]

Sounds amazing to me

[andrew mitchell]

Nicely said Pat with a touch of Valentine magic

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Andrew… Valentine Magic is syncopated Jazz … may you dodge the Arrows of Cupid’s Bow until the Show begins the Beguine… softly, Pat

[Anita Frader]

I absolutely LOVE those last two lines.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Anita… a Romantic Lover can take you to the Moon and back… I appreciate your in depth Review of a Rendezvous… softly, Pat